Little Update

[feathersofblack]

Just popping in to put up a very small chunk of story.

It's the next piece, and very small, but I didn't want to group it with the next excerpt. So, it gets to float on its own.

Once I clean up the next piece a bit, I'll post it. Maybe again tonight, if I write a bit more and get the time.

Whoop.

Comments

[viralaserithan]

Yikes... such an unsettling little piece of the story. I can just imagine that horrible fear every time she didn't come home, wondering if they were going to lose her too. :(

Again, very good. You make the emotions of the whole situation so clear... it makes it real.