Black-and-Red Conflict Ch. 32/Final

[feathers_of_ice]

Pairing: Renji and Byakuya
Rating: PG (overall M)
Spoilers: for the end of the SoulSociety arc
Discl.: Bleach and all its characters are (c) to kubotite. I do not make money with this.
Content: Byakuya is an arrogant bastard, says Renji. Abarai is an impertinent nuisance, says Byakuya. Unfortunately for them, fate never cared about their opinions.
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Comments

[lulucute15]

wahhh!!!! you're making me cry!!! I love endings, it's the first part of very book that I read, I read the endm then read the story and then the end again, sometimes, after going though that experience, it makes me sadder to read it... not I'm going to read the beginning!!!

[feathers_of_ice]

wow, that's a strange way to read a story but, cool, i guess i got you with this ending then XD

[myredpineapple]

That was such an amazing/awesome/exciting story to read. I have actually read parts of it several times again while waiting and hoping for new chapters to arrive. Funny I was just thinking of this story yesterday. I had a feeling the last one would be out. Big accomplishment to write something like this, you should be proud. I loved reading it. This last chapter was very well done.

Now that it's done will you be writing one-shots or shorter stories with this pairing again?! Or even RenShuu or ShuuRen If I recall correctly you also wrote a story with this pairing, which I also love. Forgive me if I'm wrong. Had ta ask.

[feathers_of_ice]

^^ first thing: thank you!! i was at some points getting tired of it, because it was freakin long (not compared to come other stories but simply compared to what i had written before)

and you are right actually, though i'm amazed how you know it because i'm not sure i wrote about it on lj before... yes, i do have a shuu/ren/shuu story in mind thought it's more like a 3chapter pwp
there's also a lot more to come about bya and renji... there might be a continuation of this, and there is a looooong, long AU waiting (i posted a little snatch of it with "underneath his hands")and then there's at least 5 oneshots that are half-finished
i have no idea though, when those things will be written... but the chances are big that there will be more ;)

[bundamba]

So sad that this has ended, But I enjoyed every step of the way. I think that this was the first Bya/ren fic I started reading and it sucked me right in.
As myredpinapple said I have read bits and pieces while waiting for chapters to come out but I think that I will have to re-read the whole lot from the beginning again. :)
Thanks for sharing!!

[feathers_of_ice]

:) thank you!

for rereading i suggest doing that on AFF or aarin or waiting for the PDF, because all chapters are reworked but i'm too fed up with LJ's formatting to re-up them here... ehh ^^'
thanks again

[mitsu_syusuke]

finally the epilouge! this is a very nice wrap up for the fic..
i was grinning like an idiot when Byakuya admit that he cares for Renji without any hesitate! that was so sweet of him..
i'm happy but felt sad at the same time that this story has ended.. i shall read the whole story once again! ^^ thank you for sharing this wonderful fic! <33

[feathers_of_ice]

thank you! ^^

[kateison]

Oh wow, this was...spectacular. You've wrapped up the fantastic story in such a poignant and believable way. I love how you showed the change that overcame Byakuya, and described how it affected his relationship with Renji, that was lovely.

The characterisation of everyone here was spot-on, and I adored the fact that Ukitake realises that he's going to have to deal with Kyouraku's smugness, very IC. And Bya's reluctance in his head to say 'Yes', very true to his character.

Beautiful, beautiful work. You brought a tear to my eye and tugged on my heart. I'll most certainly be re-reading this when the new version comes out :)) Keep up the great work!

[kateison]

I would also like to point out that I was smiling like a moron and giggling when Byakuya said yes. And not to mention the part about their spars for 'who tops tonight'. Very funny :D

[feathers_of_ice]

:D yeah... i thought that damn, none of them's "bottom" really, they must have some way to settle that.... they could to rock-paper-scissors too ;P (just trying to imagine byakuya doing that makes me choke on my coffee with laugh XD gotta tell my illustrator to draw me a little strip of that)

[feathers_of_ice]

thank you, thank you!
makes me so happy to hear you think this ending wrapped it all up and made it whole. :D