FIC: The Right Time (Ugly Betty, Daniel/Betty)

Apr 17, 2007 18:53

Title: The Right Time
Fandom: Ugly Betty, Daniel/Betty
Spoilers: None beyond the general premise of the show and episode 1x12, Sofia's Choice. All speculation.
Rating: PG
Summary: When Betty Suarez wins her first National Magazine Award, Daniel Meade presents it to her.
Length: 6300 words.
Thanks: To E and Jenny for fab beta action! All mistakes ( Read more... )

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survived_it_all April 17 2007, 23:47:51 UTC
Ah, this totally made me feel all warm and fuzzy. This story is wonderful and I totally appreciate the way you made this believable and I can totally see something like this happening to them realistically. (I know I keep saying totally, but just over look it, I can't think of a better word.) Thank you so much for sharing this as well as writing it. I loved it.

Have you written any more UB fiction? I would love to read it! =)

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fearlessfan April 18 2007, 01:00:03 UTC
Hey, I use totally all the time! It's a versatile word, very useful.

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback! I'm so glad you liked the story. So far, this is my first Ugly Betty story, but if I write others, I'll definitely share them on this community.

Thanks again for the note!

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survived_it_all April 18 2007, 03:21:26 UTC
Oh you're welcome! Well, you did a wonderful job with your first story. I hope to see many stories in the future. =)

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shoolessdwarf April 18 2007, 00:43:37 UTC
huzzah!

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fearlessfan April 18 2007, 01:00:25 UTC
Thank you!

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remainthesame April 18 2007, 00:52:01 UTC
YAY!!!!! I love, love, love this, because it feels like something that could happen on the show.

And also because of this line, And that's when Daniel knows, realizes three things: why Betty left Mode, the reason things didn't work out with Annabelle, and that he's missed his chance. which I just love.

PS This should be sent to all those EW readers--you know the ones I mean!

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fearlessfan April 18 2007, 01:12:37 UTC
E, what if they LISTEN to those EW readers?? I LIVE IN FEAR OF THIS POSSIBILITY!

Thank you so much for your help when I was writing this and for the lovely comment! AND congrats on your SUPER AWESOME AMAZING NEWS!!! I can't believe I started babbling to you about strawberry shortcake in the middle of your excitement - I blame sleep deprivation! Or something!

I'm glad you like that line b/c it was something I was unsure about in the story and worried whether it worked - yay! So glad you liked it!

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arsinoee April 18 2007, 01:21:04 UTC
This was so cute. Thank you.

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fearlessfan April 18 2007, 01:33:45 UTC
Thank you for the comment!

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helenish April 18 2007, 01:28:58 UTC
yay, YAY. Oh, I liked this a lot.

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fearlessfan April 18 2007, 01:37:36 UTC
Thanks, Helen!

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