FIC: The Right Time (Ugly Betty, Daniel/Betty)

[fearlessfan]

Title: The Right Time
Fandom: Ugly Betty, Daniel/Betty
Spoilers: None beyond the general premise of the show and episode 1x12, Sofia's Choice. All speculation.
Rating: PG
Summary: When Betty Suarez wins her first National Magazine Award, Daniel Meade presents it to her.
Length: 6300 words.
Thanks: To E and Jenny for fab beta action! All mistakes

Comments

[evilprettykitty]

that is TOTALLY how I see it happening.

[fearlessfan]

Yay, thank you!

Also, I'm sorry about your tough day. I wanted to comment but couldn't - hope it's okay for me to say something here (if not, let me know, and I can delete the comment or something).

[evilprettykitty]

Thank you...it's all good...they are giving me another shot tomorrow, so we will hope it goes better.

[rumor_of_war]

This was absolutely WONDERFUL! Extremely well written and thought out. Not to mention totally believable. Awesome job hun! I hope to see more from you!....please?

[fearlessfan]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you thought the story was believable and well-written. And thank you for the encouragement to write more!

[belladonna77]

I loved this story. It was amazing and very believable. Please write more.

[fearlessfan]

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I'm glad to hear the story was believable to you, and thank you for the encouragement to write more.

Also, I love that icon!

[belladonna77]

Oh, isn't it cool? I didn't make it, but I do like it so much!

Would you consider posting this to daniel_betty?

[fearlessfan]

Oh, I didn't realize you could post fanfic to that community - I just looked at the profile and saw that you can. Thanks for the tip, I think I will post it there!

[sinsense]

Oh, so warm and fuzzy. I'm not familiar with the show, but I loved this anyway - you do this to me all the time, obviously, and I should no longer be surprised.

Too tired for a real comment, unfortunately, but I like that she's so much the focus of his unremitting attention, and how you show that she's unaware of that attention (and strangely aware of it?) - the sort of tenuous and strange state two people who love each other are in before they get over themselves and admit it.

Incoherence! But I loved it. Thank you.

[fearlessfan]

Fellow Jess! Thank you so much for this lovely, lovely comment. And for someone too tired for a real comment, you did a remarkable job of articulating exactly what I was hoping to do with the story, and therefore totally making my night - thank you so much, and I'm so glad the story worked for you

[moondustwolf]

*spazzes* This is wonderful and it's long and it's believeable and squee! Stressing out over finals right now (and everything is sorta sad with that awful Virginia Tech thing), so it was so awesome to come here and just indulge in Daniel/Betty for a bit. From what I know about the next few eps, I think I'll come back here and try to ignore canon for just a couple weeks, LOL. Awesome work! Please write more when you can!

[fearlessfan]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked the story - I wrote it to indulge my own affection for Daniel/Betty, and I'm glad that the story allowed you to indulge yours!