Excuses (Ch. 1)

[fchapxih13]

  I have this friend. Well, he's my best friend. You know, those kind of best friends where you basically do stupid shit together? Yeah, his name is Anthony Padilla, and I've known him since 6th grade. We are so close, it's not even funny. I'm even living with the guy! And the sad part of it all is.. I have had this enormous crush on him ever since

Comments

[firetruckyouxx]

Someone's a little jealous ^^

Is it bad that I like Kelsie? :s She seems very nice.

[fchapxih13]

He is, isn't he? :3
And nah. She really is a nice girl.. maybe ;D

[purpleswag1]

ohh Ian's jelly! haha xD
must....see....next... chapter! get to writting ;)

[fchapxih13]

Thanks :3 I'm writing the next one now :D I'm trying to make it longer than this one.

[mutual_death]

Why is Ian always the gay one? (heh heh...I'm guilty of this, too!) He must seem MORE gay than Anthony to everyone!

This was a decent start. The plot is cliche but if you are just starting to write fanfic, it is a great way to develop your skills. [=

[fchapxih13]

Yeah I've noticed that :P Idk I guess he just seems more.. fruitier :D
And yeah, I thought so too. But with time I'll progress into better plots I hope :D

[mutual_death]

lol@fruitier. That's probably the reason! :P

[vespiquen8]

It seems like Ian is always the dead/dying one in death fics too. At least to me. :p

[michaelangelo24]

Nothing worse than falling for a straight guy. Ian must begin the conversion process. :P

Oh yes, your writing was good too. :)

[fchapxih13]

Haha thanks. :)

[vespiquen8]

I liked your story. :) Good first chapter. :DDDD Have the next one come out soon! :)

[fchapxih13]

Thankyouu :D I'm writing it right now ;D