Comments | fchapxih13: Excuses (Ch. 1)

fchapxih13

Excuses (Ch. 1)

Nov 27, 2011 00:44

I have this friend. Well, he's my best friend. You know, those kind of best friends where you basically do stupid shit together? Yeah, his name is Anthony Padilla, and I've known him since 6th grade. We are so close, it's not even funny. I'm even living with the guy! And the sad part of it all is.. I have had this enormous crush on him ever since ( Read more... )

lol, anthony, ian, gay

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arollinggirl November 28 2011, 01:54:21 UTC

Aww, poor Ian DX

fchapxih13 November 28 2011, 02:11:04 UTC

Haha I know right? :( Just wait.. He MIGHT be getting what he wants later :3

orangefriday November 28 2011, 02:19:44 UTC

Great first start! I think your dialogue was quite good :) And I lol'd when you called Kelsie a bitch.

Looking for some more!

fchapxih13 November 28 2011, 02:24:49 UTC

Thank you so much :D It really means a lot :)

smoshluva November 28 2011, 15:39:48 UTC

LOL. So much Pep it made me sick.
LOL IT made me fall off my bed. I just imagined her in a cheerleading outfit going GIMME A P! GIMME A E! GIMME A P! WHAT DOES THAT SPELL? PEP!
Yeah. I'm weird as f***.
Anyways, this is absolutely fantabulous! I would love to read more! When do you reckon part 2 will be out?
GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME GIMME!!!!!!!

fchapxih13 November 28 2011, 20:05:28 UTC

Haha that's what I intended for her personality to be like xD Glad people noticed that.
And it's actually out now ;D