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prompt 3 - cooking

Apr 28, 2009 14:45

Title: Breakfast In Bed
Author: xgrenade
Word Count: 384
Summary: Tohru awakes to breakfast in bed from her boys.
A/N: I chose the name Hajime for Kyo and Tohru's kid because it means "beginning". I really liked the thought of it. kinda fits with "a new banquet". :3 Also this is part of my short shot collective Together, Holding Hands.

( Breakfast In Bed )

author: xgrenade, prompt 3

Comments 18

tasukigirl78 April 28 2009, 19:23:56 UTC

Aw so cute. I love seeing their family life. Tohru and Kyo are awesome parents. I never did get if they had a boy or girl at the end LOL. Loved it sweetie!!!!

furousha April 28 2009, 19:27:42 UTC

yay! thank you! I love writing their family life! XD

i never did get which it was either. i've read that it was a son, but i don't know. I chose a son because i have two boys and i it's easier for me to write about the silly things they do. lol. XD

tasukigirl78 April 28 2009, 19:31:32 UTC

LOL. He was cute. You know I read the end a couple of times and I think it's hard to choose whoes their kid LOL!

They are so sweet!

furousha April 28 2009, 19:35:23 UTC

lol! i stared at the pictures on that table thing for hours trying to figure it out. Maybe when volume 23 actually comes out and i can look at in instead of online it'll be easier to tell. XD

and now i've gotta write a few stories before Hajime was born. I like writing out of order, but sometimes it makes it harder. lol.

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himehikari April 28 2009, 19:47:11 UTC

I really really love this. Bravo! Kyo and Tohru will make such adorable parents *smiles*

furousha April 28 2009, 19:50:45 UTC

thank you very very much! :D

himehikari April 28 2009, 20:02:19 UTC

I hope you are planning to write future!KyoxTohru fics!

furousha April 28 2009, 20:17:17 UTC

i am i am! i have a collective started, it only has 3 chapters though and i'm planning many many more. :D this one is a part of it. :D

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landofthekwt April 28 2009, 21:23:15 UTC

Wonderful family interaction. So glad to see the love after all these two went through.

furousha April 28 2009, 21:48:06 UTC

thank you kwt! :D

nasty_show April 29 2009, 18:14:02 UTC

♥ i love this! I want to join in the food fight too! XD

furousha April 29 2009, 18:45:58 UTC

:D yay thank you!

coastal_spirit April 29 2009, 21:01:29 UTC

This is very cute, well-written, and well-characterized. It's fun to think about what Tohru and Kyou's future life might be like, and I think this fits in perfectly. Oh, and I love the name Hajime! Good job. :)

furousha April 29 2009, 22:38:27 UTC

thank you very very much! ^__^

it is very fun to think about their future life! i love imagining it.

i like Hajime too, it was hard trying to find the perfect name but when i read the meaning i knew it was the one. :D