Fic: 14 weeks to go (a Grandview story) Rated R

Apr 29, 2009 23:55



Title: 14 weeks to go

Series: Grandview

Rating: I’ll say Heavy R for sexual content

Word count: 5,001

Spoilers: None

Warnings: None

Disclaimer: Sadly, neither Stargate Atlantis nor her characters belong to me, if they did, the show would never have been nor would it ever be canceled.

Nathan is mine, however, so take THAT mgm!

Summary: “Pantakes!” Nathan ( Read more... )

established relationship, grandview, r, mcshep, slash, series, sheppard, mckay, fic

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fawkesielady_ed April 30 2009, 12:08:51 UTC
Yeah, not just pre-term labor, but labor at all was against the rules :) lol
Poor John.

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rellan April 30 2009, 06:33:39 UTC
*clutching my stuffed penguin and staring wide eyed at the screen* O.O

Nathan and Rodney to the rescue! \o/

Babysitter Jack better find Nathan some things to do, otherwise calling the White House might be the least of the things he can get into.

I'm thinking 'putting in a call to Thor'.

...*starts laughing like mad at the thought of Thor showing up and Nathan offering to share his pantakes.*

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fawkesielady_ed April 30 2009, 12:11:00 UTC
hahaha! That would be so cute... and you know Nathan isn't the type to freak out at an alien... look at who his parents are! LOL

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vampyrehunterm April 30 2009, 10:34:11 UTC
Nathan to the rescue!
I never would have thought of Jack as the babysitting type. :) He seems to enjoy it. Besides, when you get parental urges, just borrow someone's kid for a while. Let's just hope Nathan doesn't pick up too much from him though. :)
That was a very heart wrenching chapter. Poor John.

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fawkesielady_ed April 30 2009, 12:05:05 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
They had to teach Nathan to dial their cell's in an emergency because calling 911 was out... at least until after the baby's born, lol.

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fanarts_series April 30 2009, 12:56:41 UTC
OMG you killing me ! it's so sweet, angsty, romantic, i'm very happy and you can be proud of yourself to write like that.

thanks, thanks, thanks........ a very huge hug to you.

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spes_abrin April 30 2009, 13:12:16 UTC
I think its great that they taught Nathan to use the cell phone in an emergency! And I'd love to hear the conversation Nathan had with the president! :)

On thing that confused me though, until I realized it was a typo... He wriggled out of Ronon’s grasp, ran across the room to Ronon’s chair and climbed up onto his lap. I think you meant he wriggled out of Rodney's grasp? Or maybe Jack's? I wasn't clear who might have been holding him at that moment...

Great Installment!

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fawkesielady_ed May 1 2009, 02:02:25 UTC
AH! All the rereading I did and I never caught that typo!!! What's wrong with me!
LOL, yeah, it should have been wriggled out of Jack's grasp and ran to Ronon's chair.
Thank you for pointing that out... I'll have to fix that.

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