Fic: The first move (a Grandview story) Rated G

[fawkesielady_ed]

Title: The First Move

Series: Grandview

Rating: G

Warning: Excessive cute and middle of the night cravings!

Spoilers: none

Word count: 2,210

Disclaimer: Sadly, neither Stargate Atlantis nor her characters belong to me. If they did the show would never have been nor would it ever be cancelled!

Nathan is all mine though so take THAT mgm!

Comments

[vampyrehunterm]

Rodney is such a good husband. :)
That's sweet, Nathan wanting his brother to come out. He'll make a wonderful big brother.

[fawkesielady_ed]

thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Poor little Nathan... he's a little confused... :) hehe
And Yes, Rodney is a wonderful husband! The kind I'd want if I was craving pepperoni at 4 am :) lol

[goddess47]

Awww..... such good 'cute' though.... I love the boys being mushy..... and baby kicks.....

\o/

[fawkesielady_ed]

lol! Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
I love it too, when the boys are mushy together.

Thanks for the comment!!

[fenchurch1]

Just read the whole lot - on Goddess47's recommendation. I'm 8 weeks pregnant and needed some good Mpreg to help me along - This qualified BIG TIME! Thank you very much and I can't wait for more!

[fawkesielady_ed]

Awesome! Congrats on the pregnancy!
Most of John's pregnancy is taken from my own, so it's not completely made up (although some things are... I never craved Crunchy cheetos, but the hot ones did give me heart burn and I ate the hell out of some pepperoni!)

It's so cool that someone suggested one of my stories to someone! I'm really critical of my own writing so I tend to think things aren't good enough to reccommend... so it's so cool that someone did!
Thank you for the comment!

[fanarts_series]

wonderful, i enjoy this part, peperoni LOL awesone, it's so domestic and cute.

thanks to hare.

[fawkesielady_ed]

Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it!
Thanks for the comment!

[outsideth3box]

I just realized I had this comment box open and ready in an open tab but I'd gotten distracted (No! You say, ) and well...

So yes, poor John and his poor feet. Sweet how they are so intent on experiencing everything they missed with Nathan. Loved Nathan's perfect "Eww, yuck!" reaction and then hey cool brother!

Love it.

[fawkesielady_ed]

lol thank you! Glad you liked it!
They're kind of acting like first time parents cause this is their first pregnancy :)
so sweet :)

Thanks for the comment!