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Fic: Off World (a Grandview story) Rated NC-17

Mar 29, 2009 14:44

Title: Off World

Rating: NC-17

Series: Grandview

Word count: 2,717

Warnings: None

Spoilers: one for the SG1 movie the Arc of Truth

Disclaimer: Sadly, neither Stargate Atlantis nor her characters belong to me. If they did the show would never have been nor would it ever be canceled.

Summary: John blew out a sharp breath and wished that he’d been allowed to ( Read more... )

nc-17, grandview, mcshep, slash, series, sheppard, mckay, fic

Comments 14

goddess47 March 29 2009, 21:21:06 UTC

Oh.... awwwwww...... rubbing pregnant bellies....

And we're calling it "reducing fluid levels" now, are we? ::grin:: Very nice.....

fawkesielady_ed March 29 2009, 22:30:35 UTC

Thanks :) glad you liked it!

Yes... reducing fluid levels :) It seemed to fit :) hehe

Thanks for the comment!

vampyrehunterm March 29 2009, 23:28:11 UTC

That was worth the wait. :)

fawkesielady_ed March 30 2009, 01:07:42 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you thiught so!

outsideth3box March 30 2009, 00:44:54 UTC

Poor John's poor feet! Owie! Thankfully Rodney is on top of the situation, he's so sweet.

Love these boys!

fawkesielady_ed March 30 2009, 01:07:00 UTC

thank you! glad you liked it!

rellan March 30 2009, 04:12:46 UTC

I'm glad John got to go offworld so he could realize what a bad idea it was. *makes frowny face at John* Even if offworld isn't as dangerous as it used to be. He be preggers. He not in tiptop shape anymores. *doofusaurus* *tsktsk*

Nathan choosing a present for John. *squee*

Pregnant sex and snuggles. Awwwwwww.

fawkesielady_ed March 31 2009, 01:33:13 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Nathan loves his daddy... the pregnancy is freaking him out though lol poor kid :)

I never got to have pregnant sex... but I've heard it's good :) lol

Thanks for reading and for the comment :)

fanarts_series March 30 2009, 08:10:32 UTC

rhoooooooooo i's so sweety, i love the whole characters, the chat between Daniel and John it's just some kind of funny.
Poor John, so tired, i'm with him, the feet are evil when we're pregnants.
The end is cute and sexy, thanks to you to share.

fawkesielady_ed March 31 2009, 01:30:26 UTC

thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
I know about the feet... ine almost killed me when I was pregnant... I thought maybe cutting them off would feel better. Of course I didn;t do that and now I'm happy that I still have my feet! LOL
I did cut my hair and regretted it! :)

Thanks for the comment

fanarts_series March 31 2009, 07:54:24 UTC

Funny ! better the hairs than the feet, it's better easy to walk with two feet.

fawkesielady_ed April 3 2009, 00:22:37 UTC

lol! very true!