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Without Even Leaving the Office

Oct 20, 2014 16:33

“Wow! You make this job look easy!” Cheryl said to Max after finishing up a meeting with a client. “Perhaps you could give me a pointer or two ( Read more... )

fiction, week 25, s9, prompt: intersubjectivity

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adoptedwriter October 20 2014, 23:56:08 UTC

What a terrifically twisty plot! Well done! AW

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:42:10 UTC

Thank you! It was actually fun to write.

kickthehobbit October 20 2014, 23:58:41 UTC

HOLY FUCK.

That ending was totally unexpected-this is fantastic!

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:43:19 UTC

Thank you. The ending was the part I enjoyed writing the most, actually.

medleymisty October 21 2014, 03:42:49 UTC

Haha, I like this! Nicely written, and awesome and full of win. :)

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:43:28 UTC

Aww, thank you!

n3m3sis43 October 21 2014, 12:00:46 UTC

I didn't expect the Cheryl-twist but I did expect the Nancy-twist at the very end. Nicely done. XD

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:45:01 UTC

I briefly considered the idea of having John come in rather than Nancy. I'm glad that at least one of the twists caught you by surprise.

bleodswean October 21 2014, 13:11:13 UTC

Haha! Double triple crossing. Great twists!

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:45:14 UTC

Thank you! It was fun to write.