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favoritebean

Without Even Leaving the Office

Oct 20, 2014 16:33

“Wow! You make this job look easy!” Cheryl said to Max after finishing up a meeting with a client. “Perhaps you could give me a pointer or two ( Read more... )

fiction, week 25, s9, prompt: intersubjectivity

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theun4givables October 21 2014, 13:33:39 UTC

So many different twists here; the hints of which were all laid out well. I liked it. :)

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:46:10 UTC

Thank you! I love noir, but this was my first attempt at writing in the style.

northernwalker October 21 2014, 19:20:20 UTC

I love twisty plots, and this packed a lot into a short piece. Really good!

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:46:26 UTC

Thank you!

witches October 22 2014, 11:55:31 UTC

i reall enjoyed this! <3

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:46:55 UTC

Thank you!

crisp_sobriety October 22 2014, 14:08:45 UTC

Haha! I loved that ending.

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:47:20 UTC

Thank you! The ending was fun to write.

rayaso October 22 2014, 20:03:01 UTC

Great job, and great ending! So many twists and turns, it was fun to read.

favoritebean October 29 2014, 00:48:28 UTC

Thank you! It was my first attempt at noir. I'm glad it was fun to read.