Oh, so *that's* what it takes

Feb 19, 2011 23:15

Someone posts a cliche fic meme and my brain gets hyperstimulated like I've been mainlining coke and methamphetamine for the last 36 hours, FML ( Read more... )

fiction, slash, hawaii 5-0 (2010)

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fatima_failte February 21 2011, 13:48:52 UTC
YayyayayImadesomeonelaugh! Usually it's "omg you bitch I ran out of tissues before I was halfway through" which is probably what I was going for but laughing was what I was going for here too so yay!

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grimcognito February 21 2011, 00:51:48 UTC
Yes! This was great! I couldn't stop laughing as I imagined the look on Danny's face when he picked up the shorts, "So. Where's the rest of it?"

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The Mankini Apocrypha fatima_failte February 21 2011, 14:17:45 UTC
See this right here is why I have stress whenever posting fic, because I trained as an historian originally and can't bring myself to mess with original source documents and all I want to do is go back and edit that shit in.

So, here you go:

The look on Kono's face when she handed over the paper bag should have been a dead giveaway, but Danny had been a little distracted by the knowledge that at that very moment Steve was in the shower with the steam and the soap and razor removing all his body hair so when she handed him a paper bag and said "Caterer sent this over for you" he felt he could be forgiven for thinking at first that it was a sandwich ( ... )

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Re: The Mankini Apocrypha grimcognito February 22 2011, 05:08:20 UTC
Oh, you are beyond amazing! This makes the whole thing ten times better!

"Great, so you're saying that on a team in which you, for instance, routinely wear a string bikini in the line of duty, I'm still going to win the prize for most naked."

I can so imagine his exact tone here, and you have got him down pat! *can't stop grinning*

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Re: The Mankini Apocrypha grimcognito February 22 2011, 05:08:59 UTC
Oh, you are beyond amazing! This makes the whole thing ten times better!

"Great, so you're saying that on a team in which you, for instance, routinely wear a string bikini in the line of duty, I'm still going to win the prize for most naked."

I can so imagine his exact tone here, and you have got him down pat! *can't stop grinning*

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deepbluemermaid March 19 2011, 12:05:25 UTC
Hee, I love this! The rotating perspectives are awesome :)

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