Sailor Moon Fic: untitled-1

[fated_addiction]

untitled-1
there are plenty of things to measure this life by. you are either the liar or the thief. you pick a side. she believes in none of this; somehow they managed to find her.
sailor moon | usagi/mamoru | general spoilers/AU | 5,131 words, PG.

Comments

[tosca1390]

I. AM. DEAD.

Better comment tomorrow when I'm not on my iPhone and half asleep but holy shiiiiiiiit. DEAD. FEELINGS. MOTORCYCLE. ;_____;

<33333!!!!

[fated_addiction]

I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK.

It's about to get complicated and stuff. Haha.

[outragedy]

aadkjfasdlkjf;askd

this is it, this is it fine i am REWATCHING THIS SHOW ugh you are the worst and this is stunning and giving me all the nostalgic feelings which hurt.

[fated_addiction]

KENSHIN FIC COMING SOON. If I don't get distracted by Haven. In 8 minutes.

But good. Watch the show.

[jenbunny]

I should be asleep and I was honestly going to go, but I decided to just glance at my journal and see what was there but not actually read anything. Then I saw that this was there and I just couldn't resist reading. As usual this was delightfully wonderfully. I really loved this ^^. Great work!

[fated_addiction]

Hahaha. Thank you!

legit comment now i am weeeeeeeeeping

[tosca1390]

OH MY GOD C. I AM DEAD.

Usagi likes that Ami is somewhere between shy and sharp and that Makoto keeps dropping bits of her sweets into her lunch, telling her to try them without thinking. She goes in between awe and delight with them. She doesn't need a large group around her, she thinks.

I JUST LOVE THIS. It's so true for her, and the girls, you've got them so well. It's such an interesting reversal because in the manga/anime Usagi is the one to bring them together and make them a family, and even here she still is, but it's totally unbeknownst to her. They are together for her without really knowing why and oh my god I feel like my brain is exploding with possibilities for all this. For real. Brain, exploding.

"Do you make it a habit of knowing people's names? That, you know, you don't know or anything like that

Re: legit comment now i am weeeeeeeeeping

[fated_addiction]

I've decided that the motorcycle is, like, compensation for not being able to get a sword.

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I've been thinking about the idea that she, kind of like in the same vein re: the princess, being the last to know and still very overwhelmed at the idea that she has a place with the people. So that's how it all started.

♥

[martyr4mylove4u]

I would like to preface this by mentioning that despite not having commented on any of them, I have been reading and loving all your SM fic. So much so that not only am I re-watching the anime, I also bought the manga. It is becoming a situation.

That being said-

This is gorgeous. GORGEOUS. The tone is fantastic- her loneliness is palpable and her reactions to everything are very Usagi but an Usagi tempered, again, by loneliness. She needs them- all of them- so much to fit into the world and even though she manages to find a place she's still a bit unsettled- yearning for something she can't name and you show it all so well.

I especially love the girls trying to approach her without scaring her away and Minako can't help herself and tries to protect her from Mamoru and

"I know you," she says. "You have a big heart. He doesn't. Don't let it try and change you."this killed me. And I'm not even going to try to explain the Mamoru feelings this brought out because I HAVE ALL THE FEELINGS

[fated_addiction]

I'm seeing no signs of stopping this SM revival I'm going through, lol. I'm so glad you're enjoying it though - I think since Mamoru doesn't get to have a sword, he should be on a motorcycle more, so here we are. But really, I just have so many Usagi-feelings, they just kind of go all over the place so it makes me really happy that you're digging it.

Thank you for reading!