Sailor Moon Fic: untitled-1

[fated_addiction]

untitled-1
there are plenty of things to measure this life by. you are either the liar or the thief. you pick a side. she believes in none of this; somehow they managed to find her.
sailor moon | usagi/mamoru | general spoilers/AU | 5,131 words, PG.

Comments

[martyr4mylove4u]

I would like to preface this by mentioning that despite not having commented on any of them, I have been reading and loving all your SM fic. So much so that not only am I re-watching the anime, I also bought the manga. It is becoming a situation.

That being said-

This is gorgeous. GORGEOUS. The tone is fantastic- her loneliness is palpable and her reactions to everything are very Usagi but an Usagi tempered, again, by loneliness. She needs them- all of them- so much to fit into the world and even though she manages to find a place she's still a bit unsettled- yearning for something she can't name and you show it all so well.

I especially love the girls trying to approach her without scaring her away and Minako can't help herself and tries to protect her from Mamoru and

"I know you," she says. "You have a big heart. He doesn't. Don't let it try and change you."

this killed me. And I'm not even going to try to explain the Mamoru feelings this brought out because I HAVE ALL THE FEELINGS.

Though I do have to mention, Mamoru on a motorcycle is almost disgustingly hot.

So thank you for writing this. And I can't wait for more.

And the last scene is lovely and sad and... this is getting repetitive.

[fated_addiction]

I'm seeing no signs of stopping this SM revival I'm going through, lol. I'm so glad you're enjoying it though - I think since Mamoru doesn't get to have a sword, he should be on a motorcycle more, so here we are. But really, I just have so many Usagi-feelings, they just kind of go all over the place so it makes me really happy that you're digging it.

Thank you for reading!