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fate_incomplete

I will find you by the sea

Mar 26, 2014 12:03

Title: I will find you by the sea.
Author: fate_incomplete
Rating: M
Warnings: Angst
Spoilers: Vague series 7 references (Post The Angels Take Manhattan)
Characters/Pairings: Eleven/Jack
Word Count: 1,460
Summary: Jack has been falling apart at the seams for a long time, yet offers what he can to ease the Doctor's grief.

A/N: A companion piece to Keep Falling ( Read more... )

bowties are cool, omnisexual time traveller, oh glorious angst, doctor who: love of the impossible, paradox wrapped in a coat, fic, torchwood: when it all changes, hyper sexy eleven

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a_phoenixdragon March 26 2014, 02:41:53 UTC

Ohhhh....

OMG. I dunno why I attempt Eleven/Jack when I could just wrap myself in your delicious awesomeness and purr myself straight into daydreams. This is just...omg, so epically broken and lost and beautiful. That darkness with just enough hope to run to that edge and wonder as you look down.

So, so gorgeous, honey. Ohhh, how I have missed your words!!

*CLINGS*

fate_incomplete March 26 2014, 03:08:34 UTC

Oh, thank you hun. I started this months ago and got stuck on the ending when this current block kicked in. Happy it is finally finished and not as romanticised as I first feared.

I swear these two...they are addictive. So very broken indeed, beautifully so. Jack's endless life breaks me and calls to me to keep writing him. Add in Eleven...it's a push pull effect, breaking apart and soothing over the edges over and over again.

*holds you close*

a_phoenixdragon March 26 2014, 03:34:32 UTC

Ohh, thought I recognised a bit of this!! Whew!! Nice to know I'm not imagining things!! Told you it would be perfect! *smacks you!*

They ARE. I have an urge now to write them all angst and broken whispers and desperate clashing as they fight themselves and each other along walls and against bedclothes. Unnnggghhhh. *whimpers* Sorry, sorry...*whimpers again*

*Curls close*

fate_incomplete March 26 2014, 05:15:59 UTC

Don't think I had sent you this actual piece, but it is a missing scene for something that Eleven mentions in Falling Till We Fly.

I really want to explore more of a scene from the original fic where Jack completely falls to pieces. I remember how much it hurt writing that scene (one of my favourite scenes I have written)but of course have been struggling with this block ever since. But the angst and pushing them to the brink, or just tossing them right over it...yeah it needs to be written.

The world needs more Eleven/Jack fic, so go, write!

*snuggles in and kisses you*

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