Held Captive...

Jul 01, 2010 23:10

Title: Held Captive
Author: fate_incomplete 
Rating: PG
Genre and/or Pairing: Dean/Cas
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Word Count: 600
Summary:  Such loss and heartache had no place in the eyes of an angel. Dean would give everything to ease it.

It had always been his eyes )

dean "i think i'm adorable" winchester, spn owns my soul, dean/cas have corrupted me, fic, cas has phone issues he'll call you back

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dragonlit July 1 2010, 18:03:38 UTC
Beautiful. You have Dean wanting so keenly to know all that was his angel but the part that brought it home, made it real was his recognition that maybe he would never know. Still, he would try. Really enjoyed this.

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fate_incomplete July 1 2010, 23:02:22 UTC
thank you so much *hugs*

Cas is so ancient and otherwordly that Dean may never understand him completely, but not letting that stop him from trying just seems very touching

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starsoblivion July 1 2010, 18:05:43 UTC
Very lovely.

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fate_incomplete July 1 2010, 23:03:05 UTC
thanks glad you enjoyed it.

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kronette July 2 2010, 00:37:32 UTC
this was incredibly beautiful.

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fate_incomplete July 2 2010, 02:22:06 UTC
thanks *hugs* glad you enjoyed it

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half_vulcan July 2 2010, 02:57:24 UTC
That was very moving. All the description of the knowledge and emotion in Cas' deep blue eyes was gut wrenching and beautiful at the same time. Like Dean in this story I could not look away.

I can understand wanting to change the world, wanting to give anything to take the pain from someone's eyes.

This was a fantastic story.

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fate_incomplete July 2 2010, 03:53:23 UTC
oh wow thanks so much *hugs*

To me there's so much to Castiel, so much more then meets eye, he's complicated and otherworldy, yet he feels so much, I wanted to try and capture that.

Seeing the pain in the eyes of someone you love, you'd give anything to take it away, and anything not to add to it. Seeing yourself through their eyes makes you want to be better.

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fiery_fox2 July 2 2010, 19:46:51 UTC
I have tears in my eyes, for real. This was so powerful. *sniffs and goes to put in the mems*

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fate_incomplete July 3 2010, 09:30:55 UTC
thanks so much, glad you enjoyed it *hugs*

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