Drabble: Gondor's Spring

May 14, 2006 21:30

This drabble is answering two challenges at once: the "White Tree" challenge (hope I'm not too late) and windswept1's request for a drabble about Aragorn and Faramir. (I'm afraid I still don't feel quite ready to put them both on the same stage at the same time, so hopefully this will be acceptable.) I see Faramir as a teenager in this drabble ( Read more... )

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windswept1 May 15 2006, 18:30:33 UTC
Ooh! It's lovely! and so perfect:) Mithrandir saying nice things about Faramir to Aragorn is so lovely. And Faramir's words about the tree are so insightful, and his tone comes out very well!

I like very much indeed!

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cressida0201 May 16 2006, 17:16:13 UTC
I'm relieved that you like it! I'd actually hoped to set it up so that Gandalf would mention each of the guys to the other, but I couldn't quite think of a way to bring Aragorn into the first conversation explicitly...not without going over the word limit, anyway. Thanks for the review!

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windswept1 May 17 2006, 18:05:37 UTC
Well...you could always make that another drabble:))

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numenora May 17 2006, 04:51:37 UTC
I'm with arahiril--I love reading about the friendship between Gandalf & Faramir; and the later part with Aragorn--so few words, but it says so very much. Patty.

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cressida0201 May 19 2006, 18:32:22 UTC
Thank you very much! I like Gandalf and Faramir together too.

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