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[Fiction] Eternal Sunshine

Jan 23, 2011 13:59

Title: Eternal Sunshine
Series: Katekyo Hitman Reborn
Pairing and Genre: Yamamoto/Gokudera. Introspection, Romance, Hurt/Comfort, Dark.
Words and Progress: 4100; Complete.
Notes: M. Presented as a series of (mostly) unrelated drabbles. Warnings listed with each part. Some are AU and some are not. Some of my more obvious writing ticks are made even ( Read more... )

f.animanga: reborn, shipping: 8059, love: yuri, love: enemies, expression: fiction, love: slash

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faorism January 24 2011, 04:54:51 UTC

It's really amazing. It had it's moments of WTF WAH IS GOING ON? But overall, it's about Tsuna becoming the mafia man we all see in him, and even the tone of the manga reflects him progress. Like, it starts off cracky&hilarious, but it grew more and more serious until the MADNESS that's going on right now! I most def recommend it.

(and omg, steve made that icon! ♥ i knew i saw your name before.)

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faorism January 24 2011, 14:24:35 UTC

The manga gets a lot better once you get through the initial crack. Amano is really really searching for the right tone in the first chapters, but eventually she gets it and gets it well.

I don't watch the anime, but that's because imo manga > anime with any series. :)

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faorism January 24 2011, 04:55:55 UTC

Thank you waifu! ♥ Although I am regretting not making the last drabble into it's own fic post. I didn't realize just how long it was until after I posted. OH WELL. Better luck next time.

faorism January 24 2011, 04:56:27 UTC

And there will be a next time, because Pec is CRAZY and already posted a new meme to entice me.

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faorism January 24 2011, 05:12:29 UTC

IDK BECAUSE I JUST POSTED A FEW OF THEM?

@2. AWHHHHWH THANKS. TIS MY GOAL!

@8. I still think I'm a little crazy for writing old man sexytiems (and that that was not the first time I've done so)!

@12. ALWAYS.

Well, how am I supposed to walk away when you posted A NEW MEME. !!! You are just ASKING for me to waaaaaaaaaste my next lifetime on KHR when I got SOOOO much other shiz to do.

mochalatt3 January 24 2011, 03:13:00 UTC

There were so many great lines in all these drabbles. I loved them &hearts

faorism January 24 2011, 05:07:37 UTC

Thank you bb. ♥ I put lots of time on these, and it's nice to know I wasn't totalllllly flaking out over it.

onna_sannomiya January 26 2011, 14:15:05 UTC

I don't come across good 8059 fic too much these days, but these drabbles are beautifully written and packed with raw emotion even though they just depict short scenes instead of full-blown stories. I especially loved the drabbles where they try and fail at sex, Yamamoto's coma, and Hayato gradually falling apart as the Vongola goes from success to success. The scene where Yamamoto tries to make the perfect gnocchi made me grin like mad ( ... )

faorism January 27 2011, 08:50:39 UTC

@genderbend names: So you know the moment when you realize you put something in, knowing you're going to change it later... only to forget and post it without the revisions? Yeaaaaaaaaaaah. I knew they were wrong and even wrote them in so that my spell check would flash them. /sigh. The things I let through! Thank you for pointing that out, and even go further and offer suggestions! That saved me a TON of time. :) I went with Hayako/Takami, because it sounded the best together and the most similar to their original names (to my ears, at least). So yeah. NITPICKING IS AWESOMEST THING EVER ♥.

@everything else: There's one thing I love, and it's definitely making scenes in very small spaces... in my writing, that is. I haven't been able to write much for 8059 because I keep getting dragged down by longer stories. Drabbles definitely help me focus in on one thing so I can get it done and move on ( ... )