Come Away to the Water, for Everyone

May 01, 2014 23:36

Title: Come Away to the Water
For: Everyone
Word count: 4100~
Rating: R
Warnings: gore, minor character death
Summery: "The siren's song, though irresistibly sweet, was no less sad than sweet, and lapped both body and soul in a fatal lethargy, the forerunner of death and corruption."

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taerissa May 2 2014, 09:56:29 UTC
cRIES

this is beautiful ;_______;;;;

i find sirens!au fic really interesting omfg

never knew what sirens were until ppl started to write about them

sad that jongdae died :((((( but oh well, it was needed

the endING KILLED ME

goodbye im gone

i love love this TT____T<333

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yeolxing May 2 2014, 13:45:33 UTC
Wow. I don't know what else to say honestly. This was incredible. To capture that whole story in a little more than 4000 words I have no idea how you did it. The descriptions of the sirens were amazing and especially Yixing's and how he was different. The sadness that he and Yifan shared. What I really loved was Yifan and Minseok's friendship based on mutual understanding. The whole story was very beautifully written and the world, described in it, was very well built. It was a wonderful and also very sad read and just how everything was connected from Zitao's death at the beginning to the story ending with it was amazing. Thank you so much for writing this. It's definitely one of my favorites.

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tyreling May 6 2014, 03:28:40 UTC
This went straight into my chest like a knife. Just wow.

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hollyxsuicide May 27 2014, 00:43:37 UTC
i'm seriously baffled that this pieceisnt more commented upon. it literally ripped my heart out, EVERYTHING WAS BEAUTIFUL. chen is my bias but i'm glad he died in a gory way here x'D
thank you thank you.

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surprisepotato May 1 2015, 09:23:19 UTC
ok.... everything hurts.

Oh man, that ending absolutely killed me.. I love the friendship between Minseok and Kris though! Thank you so much for writing this!

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