Come Away to the Water, for Everyone

[tyreling]

Title: Come Away to the Water
For: Everyone
Word count: 4100~
Rating: R
Warnings: gore, minor character death
Summery: "The siren's song, though irresistibly sweet, was no less sad than sweet, and lapped both body and soul in a fatal lethargy, the forerunner of death and corruption."

Comments

GREAT but just one problem

[meep26]

I absolutely loved how you wrote this! All the descriptions of how everything looked, all the emotions, and how the beginning was tied to the end!!! Just one problem though that lowkey ruined the ending for me (but I bet you 100%) that one else noticed. Gold doesn't rust...that's one of the reasons most people use it.