Fic: Apple

[a2zmom]

I was originally going to go with a slightly less opaque title, but there you go.

Unbetaed, so all mistakes (and I am sure there are loads) are mine.

PG.

Comments

[spiralleds]

The road to hell is paved with good intentions, eh? Great peek into how it was that Amy began to go astray. And if she was this stressed about losing a short amount of time after her mom's spell, no wonder she was hell on wheels after losing about three years.

(And I loved the little glimpse at the Buffy and Angel dynamic from an outsiders POV.)

[a2zmom]

I am genetically unable to throw B&A into everything I write.

I am glad you enjoyed my version of how Amy became the very different Amy we saw later.

[sweptawaybayou]

This was very fun to read, very captivating! You breathed life into Amy!

I enjoyed this very, very much.

Thank you for sharing!

[a2zmom]

I figured something must have caused Amy to change. So I decided to explore what might have happened.

[faymeadows]

Nice one. Love the flashbacks! The one with the $20 dress was seriously creepy, and made me think how different things were for Amy and Tara: the examples they were set by their witch-mothers.

OMG, Catherine: "want, take, have" much? Yet she'll never be a princess again.

Enjoyed Amy following Buffy with her demon-detector, too. Glad she didn't decide to pick up Angel for $20 there.

[a2zmom]

I wouldn't mind picking up Angel for $20!

Glad you enjoyed.

[thismaz]

The interleaving of past and present works really well to give extra depth to Amy as a character. Very nice.

[a2zmom]

Thanks. She was fun to play around with.

[ares132006]

Lovely insight into Amy's life as a little girl. *Mommy dearest much?* Poor Amy. Imagine having a mother like that?

Loved her view of Angel and Buffy in the cemetery. Hugs you for that little peek.

And it is a slippery slope, isn't it? Just this once. Great forshadowing.

Great fic. Well done.

[a2zmom]

A very slippery slope.

And Catherine wasn't exactly a great role model.