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a2zmom in fantas_magoria

Fic: Apple

Jul 26, 2008 20:40

I was originally going to go with a slightly less opaque title, but there you go.

Unbetaed, so all mistakes (and I am sure there are loads) are mine.

PG.

( Apple )

pre-series, fiction, 103 the witch

Comments 15

librarian2003 July 27 2008, 08:36:51 UTC

Lovely story. It's a very illuminating, and believable, background for Amy. The two separate but interwoven stories worked very well.

And yes, One small thing, done for what seems an entirely justifiable reason, makes the next step, and the next, all that much easier. The slippery slope, and you've started her on it beautifully.

And thank you for the peek into off-screen Buffy and Angel. :~))

Loved it all.

a2zmom July 27 2008, 20:05:58 UTC

Angel and Buffy always demand to be there! What can I do?

I decided that there must have been something to change Amy from what we see here to where she winds up.

catko July 27 2008, 20:07:30 UTC

I love the background and the detail. The passing down of the gift through the generations of women. I like the characterization of Amy as part high-school kid, part scary-damaged person. Ominous.

annegables July 28 2008, 01:17:02 UTC

Well - the first word out of my mouth at the end of reading this was "amazing". Your imagination worked overtime here and it was great! Thank you very, very much.

scribesds August 18 2008, 10:49:26 UTC

Sorry, I'm a bit late with my response to this one - RL issues mean I'm running a little behind with my reading….

With a witch for a mother, how could Amy's background possibly be normal? I love they way you show how she comes to accept what she is. And I love the little B/A ness of this! Very good, my dear.