Fic: The Group Throws a Birthday-vention (3/?)

Jun 19, 2011 18:18

“I’m sorry what?” Jeff scoffed, crossing his arms as he frowned at Abed. “I think I misheard you. Did you say intervention?”

“Golden Oldie over here’s losing his hearing,” Pierce stage whispered to the others smugly. Jeff just glared at him. He didn’t have the time or energy to think of a witty comeback. And he’s not old damn it!

“No, you heard ( Read more... )

fan: fiction, pairing: troy/britta, pairing: jeff/annie

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teruel_a_witch June 20 2011, 00:15:37 UTC
Great chapter, so much stellar group interaction, and I LOLed at Pierce's housekeeper crying "You are the worst!" to Britta, that was hilarious XD

Now Jeff and Annie stuck in a confined place? A dream come true and can't wait to see what happens *gg*

The audience can only endure so much will-they-or-won’t-they sexual tension before they either lose interest or get angry. Just look at “Bones.”
PREACH IT, SISTAH! Bones has turned out to be such a letdown.

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fangirl_101 June 20 2011, 12:58:13 UTC
"Great chapter, so much stellar group interaction"

Thank you so much! I find it tough keeping everyone in character and making sure they all get a decent amount of dialogue, so I'm really excited to hear that you liked it :D

"PREACH IT, SISTAH! Bones has turned out to be such a letdown."

LOL, yeah. I don't even watch it anymore. I can only be kicked around so many times...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

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teruel_a_witch June 20 2011, 21:03:58 UTC
I do still watch Bones, can't quit it, even though they pretty much screwed us over with the RST too (you have heard the eye-rolling way they handled it, haven't you?)

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fangirl_101 June 21 2011, 01:06:54 UTC
Oh yeah, I heard. I have a friend who's still sticking with it for Angela and Hodgins. She gives me cliff's notes on what's happening. That was a shitty move. I was so pissed.

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greta_garbo June 20 2011, 02:03:32 UTC
Oh, a West Wing reference! To my favorite ship of all time! I love it!

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fangirl_101 June 20 2011, 13:02:41 UTC
The West Wing reference was just for you! I figured you'd appreciate it... and it is your fic :)

Also the closet thing was for you too. I figured that would be the perfect setting to force them to have an awkward conversation about their relationship, per one of your prompts.

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jessicamherrera June 20 2011, 15:26:32 UTC
This is made of win.
I will be requiring part 4 right now.
I'll try to wait patiently :)

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fangirl_101 June 20 2011, 16:09:26 UTC
LOL thank you so much! I try to update once a week but I already know this week's gonna be super busy. I'll try to get chapter 4 posted ASAP. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

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fangirl_101 July 1 2011, 13:15:12 UTC
I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks for the lovely feedback. I like writing Pierce because I can write the most horrible, offensive things but it's totally in character and I can get away with it because it's Pierce saying them. (NOT that I am a mean person who wants to say awful things to people. It's just fun sometimes to write a jerk.)

"Jeff and Annie locked in a closet together. Bring on the awkward/awesome times"

Exactly. *insert evil grin here*

"The hint of stronger Annie was good too where she wanted to stand her ground and say something. I hope she gets to do that in the next chapter (or ones after)"

I love Confident!Strong!Annie... but you know Jeff does NOT want to have this conversation so he will do anything in his power to keep from having it.

Chapter 4 is almost done and I hope to have it posted by the end of the weekend. Thanks for R&R!!!

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Re: Great chapter fangirl_101 October 22 2011, 12:56:23 UTC
Thank you!! I hope the rest of this story doesn't disappoint. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

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