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One of Those Things

Aug 09, 2007 01:21

Title: One of those things
Rating: R - To be Safe
Pairings/Characters: Sam/Dean, Dean/OFC
Warnings: Angst

Summary: So...I was reading fics all day, because I've been depressed that no one noticed that 'Bones' had been posted of my Four Part series entitled: Blood, Skin, Bones, Soul. Then I got to listening to a Melissa Etheridge song..(go figure) and I ( Read more... )

Comments 6

lemonflav_lopfe August 9 2007, 09:20:45 UTC

Niiiice.

The ending felt a little rushed to me, after the long, intense angst and depression of the previous moments between them. I'd have liked to have seen and heard Sam defend himself more, but the way you had him and Dean interact was just beautiful.

And the Impala as a pivotal moment? Fantastic. That whole scene just screamed 'WRONG!' and it was the right time for Sam to realise it.

Awesome. I Mem'ed.

:D fanfic_addict04 August 9 2007, 15:05:10 UTC

I wasn't sure anyone was going to review this!

Yeah I know, the ending WAS rushed. I wrote it at like 3:00 A.M. and have to be at work at like 9:30 A.M. so it was a rushed kind of ending.

However, I didn't want to write the interaction between Brandy Dean and Sam if she saw them kissing. I just wanted something to be easy for them for once. You know?

But thank you for the compliments, they are much appreciated. And thank you for reviewing! I'm always so positive that people just hate my stuff. So thank you for...not-hating it. lol.

-Fanfic_Addict04-

runedgirl August 9 2007, 16:43:19 UTC

Ouch, that was painful to read -- but that just means you got the heartache down really well. I especially liked the scene where a heartbroken Sam just runs and runs and runs, not even knowing where he's going, not caring. It rang very true emotionally. I agree it ended a bit too precipitously, and while I'm totally happy that the boys ended up together (as I was sitting there rooting for them all along), I can't help but hurt for Brandy too, left in the dust (literally, apparently...) on her wedding day. I wanna slap Dean upside the head for the way he 'fixes' things, with both Sam and then with Brandy! LOL
Lynsey

fromyourashes August 9 2007, 19:11:57 UTC

jesus fucking christ.

...eep... fanfic_addict04 August 9 2007, 23:26:17 UTC

I'm going to uh...
assume that was a good 'jesus fucking christ'...

It was...right?

*hides*

-fanfic_Addict04-

Re: ...eep... fromyourashes August 10 2007, 08:13:00 UTC

good lord, yes. *grins*