Fic: Behind Closed Doors (1/1)

Dec 04, 2010 23:26

Title: Behind Closed Doors
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Top Gear (UK)
Pairing: James/Richard, with a bit of Jeremy/Richard in the beginning.
Word Count: 5630
Summary: James stumbles into a situation he was really not expecting, and then gets offered something he never thought he’d have. Yeah, that’s not vague at all. LOL
Warnings: informal BDSM themes ( ( Read more... )

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capra_maritimus December 16 2010, 02:22:54 UTC
I've been rereading this and trying to figure out what it is about this fic that is so compelling. (Hence the lateness of this comment.) Maybe I should just say that 'I loved it!' :D

Ok, one of the things I love is how there is so much 'showing' rather than 'telling', especially in the dialogue bits - things are hinted at and talked around rather than stating the obvious. And I think this is the first Jeremy/Richard I've read where Jeremy wasn't actually interested in Richard, which is a whole new dynamic. :D:D:D

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random_yayness December 16 2010, 03:56:43 UTC
Awww, thank you so much!! I'm so glad you loved it, 'compelling' is a great compliment. ♥

I'm chuffed you appreciated my dialogue style, I figure that's realistic. Men aren't talking about their thoughts and feelings and inner motivations, not any more than they think they need to. lol

Well, Jeremy's interested in Richard to a degree or he wouldn't have been in that position. LOL But yeah, he's not interested like James is. I'm really surprised how many people really liked that angle, I was nervous it would be too out of the ordinary.

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random_yayness May 19 2011, 22:16:49 UTC
*ICON IS ME* Oh wow, thank you so much! First times are my absolute favorites as well, that's mostly what I write. XD I'm so glad you enjoyed it, especially as a first fic! *beams*

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