make thee another self for love of me (2/6)

[gidget_zb]

Title: make the another self for love of me
Fandom/Pairing: Doctor Who, River/Doctor
Rating: M
Wordcount: 36,853
Warnings: human!AU
Summary: “I’m not getting any younger, am I? And I may never meet a man I want to spend the rest of my life with, let alone raise children with, and even if I do, well it’ll be too late. I’ve always wanted children. And I

Comments

[betawho]

"She chewed on her lip in thought and heard him make a choked noise in the back of his throat. “You can’t do that - that thing with your lip, please.”

Oh, he's got it so bad. This is wonderful. Both of them so wildly attracted, but not knowing what to do about it.

And hot. As your usual. Love it.

“That soon?! Oh you must be so excited, are you excited? I’m excited!”

Oh, Amy. ROFL!

I'm loving the tension and the uncertainty, everything River's going through. And all the Doctor's little tell-tale reactions. You're writing this very realistically.

“Yes, you can. And you will.” Amy slapped the table for emphasis. “I have spoken!”

LOL! Lay down the law, Amy!

"Also I’ve been up since five, I may be slightly excited

[gidget_zb]

Aww thank you honey :)

[meggie2014]

Keeps getting better!!! :)

[jane_scarlett]

Martha!!! Brilliant that she was slipped in there :)
Even AU its still so them, and so believablely done. Couldn't stop laughing, picturing him waiting at the doctor...