make thee another self for love of me (4/6)

[gidget_zb]

Title: make the another self for love of me
Fandom/Pairing: Doctor Who, River/Doctor
Rating: M
Wordcount: 36,853
Warnings: human!AU
Summary: “I’m not getting any younger, am I? And I may never meet a man I want to spend the rest of my life with, let alone raise children with, and even if I do, well it’ll be too late. I’ve always wanted children. And I

Comments

[betawho]

More hotness.

And I love that she was craving fish fingers and custard. And it was all his fault. And that she got mad because he complained about her shoes, even though she knew he was right, and that she wasn't going to admit it.

And him recording the baby's heartbeat. Which I could completely see the Doctor doing.
"It was a soft green with tiny giraffes dancing across the front and River inexplicably felt herself tear up at the sight of it."

AWWWW! If their nursery isn't decorated with baby giraffes it would be a crying shame. lol!

“What was that?!”

Uh-oh, LOL! Amy radar!

“You are both too stupid to function."

ROFLMAO!

Poor River, so vulnerable. So worried she's not good enough. Sigh.

On to the next chapter!

(This is beautifully well written by the way.)

[gidget_zb]

Hahaha well we can pretend there's giraffes on the TARDIS blue walls yeah?

[timidlight]

This is so beautiful. I love all of your stories, and have known for quite some time now that you write River and the Doctor so clearly, letting them be sexy and funny and vulnerable all within the same story, but it's really lovely to see Amy bloom in your writing too. You've really got her at the perfect mix of teasing and caring, which is the best part about Amy but incredibly difficult to capture. I can't wait to keep reading (and will do so, regardless of the hour or the fact that I have work tomorrow).

[jane_scarlett]

Could not stop giggling about her craving fish fingers and custard ....
Really love how well you're writing Amy too.