Go (and don't turn back)

Mar 06, 2010 23:25

Title: Go (and don't turn back)
Pairings: YunRi / MinRI
Rating: pg-13
Genre: angst
Length: oneshot
A/N: Inspired by the song "Take care of my girlfriend" by B2ST. Something that took a little too long to write. I've always wanted to write MinRi/YunRi or something for mintheart & Free To Go.
Warning: You would probably have to have read Free To Go to ( Read more... )

pairing: yunho/fc, genre: angst, group: dbsk, author: colourheart, rating: pg-13

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fandkz_ot3 March 7 2010, 19:53:57 UTC
NICE NICE NICE
VERRY NICE
xDDDDD
ITS ALL YUNHO'S FAULT
lol i guess this is supposed to be sad?
but i laughed so hard at it. oh yunho. you tank piece of hunky pie!
<3 i love juu so much !!!
Cookie, and yunho, and yoochun, maybe changmin...i dunno. but he's hot.
ok
off topic
i loved this
it made me HAPPY! like a penguin :3

*MUCHO HEARTS!*

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Hubby anonymous March 9 2010, 05:32:03 UTC
<3
<3
<3
EHHHHKKKK!lol i dun even know who the characters are but i LOVE IT!!!! XDDD sure it's a little angtsy - but like you don't get hurt through life. I like how it portrays the heartbreak and broken friendship as well as the remolding of a heart and redemption. Ohlalalaaaa so...is there a part where this 'min' actually meets Rita again? I feel so bad for that other guy ... Yunho! LOL Poor dude, well... he blew his chance - sucker! i mean...*pat pat* empathy given. ;) I read sequel? :3 love it love it love it! Don't even be ashamed of your writing you hear me! i love it very much!

Very nice very nice :DDD
LOL btw - challenge for Colourheart - write a lemon? ;M
(: Awesome job! Keep writing baby!

With much love,
Your hubby <3

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Re: Hubby fandkz_ot3 March 11 2010, 01:49:20 UTC
i see father's pawprints all over this comment
>D

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lovescripted March 30 2010, 21:46:58 UTC
OHMYGOD
I read this while listening to rock music, and I felt the angst leaking from this fanfiction, really.
I like your writing so much, maybe that's why I asked you for a fanfiction. (WHICH IS AWESOME GUISE OMFG)
At first, I was all for the Yunho x Rita pairing when I read the uh, smut, written by one of the authors on here... (Sorry, god.)
But at the end of said story, it said that Changmin turned his back at Rita, so I was like, "Uh oh, Changmin's heart broken. D:"

I almost cried for Yunho, at this part,
“Promise me you’ll be a better boyfriend. Promise you you’ll never leave her side. And that you’ll love her like I couldn’t. Please be happy.
And Please forget about me, Rita.”
T^T. You are such a good writer. Keep on writing! ;D

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