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Torchwood Fic: The Loudest Voice (Jack/Ianto)

Dec 19, 2006 08:16

Title: The Loudest Voice
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Ianto/Jack
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Until Torchwood 1x10, Out Of Time
Summary: There are times when silence has the loudest voice.
Disclaimer: they're entirely and completely RTD's, and the Beeb's. Although I wouldn't mind getting custody of them, say, every other weekend?
( There is no light in Jack's office. His feet lead him there all the same, and he leans his forehead against the glass pane, eyes closed, hands in his pockets. )

fanfiction, torchwood, slash, torchwood fanfiction

Comments 80

farosdaughter December 19 2006, 11:34:58 UTC

Sigh. So lovely.

fan_elune December 19 2006, 17:06:41 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

notevery December 19 2006, 12:09:50 UTC

Oh, that was superb. I really, really enjoyed it. You write beautifully, have a gift for delicately and concisely evoking the most complex of emotions. This is probably the single best fic I've read, in my mind, at grasping the complexity and the subtlety of these two's relationship.

Loved it!

fan_elune December 19 2006, 17:08:00 UTC

Oh, wow. Thanks. I'm not even sure what to say to that, apart from, thanks a lot, and I'm so glad you liked it that much. Thank you!

notevery December 19 2006, 21:15:13 UTC

In other news, that icon is actually heart-stoppingly hot. Who is it?

fan_elune December 19 2006, 22:22:11 UTC

James McAvoy! Excellent Scottish actor most famous all over the world for being Mr. Tumnus in Narnia, these days. He's truly amazing.

druis December 19 2006, 12:25:06 UTC

Very well done. The voices are perfect, the sex is hot, and you've managed to make it melancholy without being depressing.

fan_elune December 19 2006, 17:08:41 UTC

Thank you! Sounds like I pulled off everything I wanted to. :) Thanks for taking the time to leave feedback.

adafrog December 19 2006, 14:03:43 UTC

Lovely story. I'm glad Jack got what he needed after that episode.

fan_elune December 19 2006, 17:09:52 UTC

Yes, I couldn't but write it. I just watched that and was so thrown by JB's performance, the look on Jack's face... and then I read the IM transcript and I just had to. I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks a lot for the feedback.

tonko December 19 2006, 14:53:49 UTC

Yesss, aftermath fic! Really somber and sad and hot, and I love the atmosphere (and the the really shallow part of me loved Ianto on top. ::cough::) and Ianto making Jack stop with the babbling cover-up he keeps pulling.

fan_elune December 19 2006, 17:11:32 UTC

Ahaha there's nothing wrong iwth a bit of shallowness. Ianto makes a very good top. Anyway! I'm glad that I seemed to nail everything I wanted to - somber and sad and hot - and yes, Jack speaks a lot, but there are times when Ianto can't take it. Won't take it. Thanks a lot for the feedback.