Comments | fallenmagic: "Second Star to the Right" - Paire one-shot challenge #12 'Anniversary'

fallenmagic

"Second Star to the Right" - Paire one-shot challenge #12 'Anniversary'

Sep 01, 2009 02:16

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Second Star to the Right
Characters/Pairing: Peter, Claire, Nathan. Subtle Paire.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 585 w/ quote, 548 without.
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers - you're safe after the S1 finale. Illusion of incest if you squint.
Disclaimer: I don't own Heroes.
Summary: No matter what, she always leaves the window open.
A/N: So much ( Read more... )

fic, challenge, pg, paire

Comments 15

obisgirl September 1 2009, 01:54:03 UTC

Oooooh! I like that. Kinda mystical and sweet.

fallenmagic September 1 2009, 06:58:07 UTC

Thanks! :)

dauting September 1 2009, 02:14:21 UTC

The Peter Pan quote that accompanies this just makes the whole story full of win, especially with Claire being both Wendy and Peter at the same time.

Good luck with the challenge.

fallenmagic September 1 2009, 06:59:35 UTC

Thank you :) Heh, who knew that a window would prompt me to think up Peter Pan/Paire references.

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fallenmagic September 1 2009, 07:00:43 UTC

Yay! Fluffy-goo is good ;) Thank you very much :)

eternity_fate September 1 2009, 02:35:23 UTC

That was very well written.

fallenmagic September 1 2009, 07:01:59 UTC

Thank you :)

commen_sense September 1 2009, 02:58:02 UTC

you should go on hiatus's more often :P the peter pan quote went perfectly with this and i loved how you used second person. you seem to really nail claire's pov :)

good luck on the challenge :)

fallenmagic September 1 2009, 07:07:12 UTC

I'm back on hiatus now...except maybe for that crack!fic :P Thanks very much :)