"Second Star to the Right" - Paire one-shot challenge #12 'Anniversary'

[fallenmagic]

Fandom: Heroes
Title: Second Star to the Right
Characters/Pairing: Peter, Claire, Nathan. Subtle Paire.
Rating: PG
Word Count: 585 w/ quote, 548 without.
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers - you're safe after the S1 finale. Illusion of incest if you squint.
Disclaimer: I don't own Heroes.
Summary: No matter what, she always leaves the window open.
A/N: So much

Comments

[paynesgrey]

Oh, how lovely! The ending was just PERFECT. Fantastic job. <3

[fallenmagic]

Thanks very much :D

[urbanpurple]

Wow Ellie, this is just WOW. Loved the Peter Pan quote, it's perfect for this fic, and Peter Pan is my fave story ever since i was little <3

"You struggle with your immortality the way children struggle growing up - it’s painful, heartbreaking, something you don’t want to do but can’t stop from happening."
This i love. It's so true, and i love the use of words <3

And LMAO @ how you got the idea for this, so random haha.

[fallenmagic]

Thanks, hun! :D I think it's one of my faves too. I used to watch the film over and over again hehe.

I know, I have no control over my brain's thought process, lol

[wuhdemah]

Oh, WOW, just wow! I'm really glad you did go with the second person perspective with this, because it just fits the flow of the story so well and... Peter Pan! And gah! <3 I loved it. It's heartbreaking yet fluffy and sweet at the same time. Eesh.

Great job, Ellie. :D

[fallenmagic]

Hee, thank you hun, for reading and pointing me in the right direction with which person to write in :) Glad you enjoyed it!