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A Prayer for Charlie Pace (part 2)

May 31, 2007 13:17

A Prayer for Charlie Pace

Name: Falafel
Title: A Prayer for Charlie Pace.
Summary: An AU story in two parts. Desmond saves Charlie from drowning in the Looking Glass, but when Charlie falls gravely ill Desmond fears that he may have made a mistake in robbing him of his destiny.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost.
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Desmond, Charlie, ( Read more... )

angst, weepy, charlielives!, chesmond

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falafel_fiction May 31 2007, 14:04:52 UTC

Sorry Pace, that's the end for this fic. I wanted to leave it up in the air whether Charlie lives or dies. The reader can decide for themselves. Personally I would like to believe that Desmonds little vision of CC&Aaron on the boat could come true.

What did you think?

spikessweetgirl May 31 2007, 13:37:19 UTC

This was wonderful...

Poor Charlie

I loved Desmond's rant and Sawyer's concern. And Hurley was great:)

falafel_fiction May 31 2007, 14:08:01 UTC

Thanks! I do love writing Desmond rants. Man knows how to rant. Err...did I really show Sawyer being concerned?! I guess by Sawyers standards he shows some humanity in this fic.

jellyfrog May 31 2007, 14:30:08 UTC

Oh, good HEAVENS! Cappy, I have honestly NEVER cried reading fanfic before, ever, until now. I have no words.

Darlton needs read this so they could finally understand what their own bloody story ought to be about.

falafel_fiction May 31 2007, 15:04:25 UTC

Thanks Jelly. That means so much. It's such a big deal if you can make your readers cry.

See the line...

"Either God wasn't listening or God simply didn't care"

...that one was inspired by Darlton.

Stupid bleeding writers... jellyfrog May 31 2007, 15:31:53 UTC

GOSH! The writers outta have something as good as this! He is alive and they all bloody well know it!! I was practically praying they'd keep him on the show!!! If the writers would listen 2 the people (Save the Junkie...U know the rest)then he wouldn't...die.

Can U help me? jellyfrog May 31 2007, 15:35:51 UTC

Ok, LOVED the fic...I cried! Anyway, how do you post fics? I write a few and want 2 see if they suck or not. Can U help me?

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iknowitsmad May 31 2007, 15:42:50 UTC

I think I'm going to choose that vision Desmond has as my own personal ending. I need something to cheer me up a little.

But this was wonderful. I loved Sawyer's concern and Hurley (of course), but I also loved Desmond and his talk with Charlie in Claire's tent.

falafel_fiction May 31 2007, 23:04:08 UTC

Thanks Lady M. I think it's nice to have more hopeful option.

babydazzle May 31 2007, 17:35:33 UTC

falafel_fiction May 31 2007, 23:02:31 UTC

I always like a bit of Sayid in my fics!