A Prayer for Charlie Pace (part 2)

[falafel_fiction]

A Prayer for Charlie Pace

Name: Falafel
Title: A Prayer for Charlie Pace.
Summary: An AU story in two parts. Desmond saves Charlie from drowning in the Looking Glass, but when Charlie falls gravely ill Desmond fears that he may have made a mistake in robbing him of his destiny.
Disclaimer: I don't own Lost.
Rating: PG-13 
Characters: Desmond, Charlie,

Comments

[jellyfrog]

Oh, good HEAVENS! Cappy, I have honestly NEVER cried reading fanfic before, ever, until now. I have no words.

Darlton needs read this so they could finally understand what their own bloody story ought to be about.

[falafel_fiction]

Thanks Jelly. That means so much. It's such a big deal if you can make your readers cry.

See the line...

"Either God wasn't listening or God simply didn't care"

...that one was inspired by Darlton.

Stupid bleeding writers...

[jellyfrog]

GOSH! The writers outta have something as good as this! He is alive and they all bloody well know it!! I was practically praying they'd keep him on the show!!! If the writers would listen 2 the people (Save the Junkie...U know the rest)then he wouldn't...die.

Can U help me?

[jellyfrog]

Ok, LOVED the fic...I cried! Anyway, how do you post fics? I write a few and want 2 see if they suck or not. Can U help me?

Re: Can U help me?

[jellyfrog]

Thank U pacejunkie!!! LYL!

Re: Stupid bleeding writers...

[falafel_fiction]

The writers aren't allowed to read fanfic. Shame really. They might learn something.

[jellyfrog]

Aw, sorry, pace. :S Your fic is amazing and I'm sure I would have cried if the poignancy of it hadn't been tempered by my intense dislike of Claire, which has only gotten worse lately. It's no reflection on your abilities as a writer, believe me! :D