Ohhhhhhhh, CRAP, that ending... And a tracking device, too-I should have known.
On the upside, yaaaaaaaaay, Jon and Stephen moving forward with their relationship! Didn't even consider how careful Stephen would have to be, though-this bit made me laugh:
I have never had a hickie hurt this bad before.
And this just made my heart melt:
"My poor Stephen." He whispered.
Stephen sighed. "My always worrisome Jon."
Sigh. Those two, seriously...
I also love the constant battle between Keith and Stephen, though Keith clearly needs to learn to control his temper. Easier said than done, though, sometimes, I'm sure, and given what he's been through (aw :(), anger is to be expected.
Love the mix of emotions you had in here, it was like a roller coaster. Things are starting to heat up, so, yeah, can't wait for the next part :D.
I'm really enjoying writing this, although I am quite stuck on the next theme.
Alright well-I didn't really mean to have Keith turn out to be so short-tempered but considering the things he's trying to keep a secret from Anderson, well I'm sure anyone would go insane. And Jon and Stephen :) Gosh they are just so cute to write even if it is Stephen's character and he's kind of a jerk. Stephen has to be extra careful not to hurt Jon when doing...things. Lol
Eh, well, he DID bring flowers at the beginning (which I also loved), so yeah, he's still a good guy. Just the tension of the situation boiling over (and Stephen's personality doesn't always help, either).
Jon and Stephen are always fun to write, no matter what's going on, there's still an adorableness about them that can't be shaken. He and Keith are trying, thankfully Jon and Anderson are patient enough to try and calm them down.
Like Knightsblack mention reading these themes were so much like a rollercoaster ride! i literary sitting in my chair: one moment laughing, throwing my arms up in excitement and then the next moment worried!! (And YES, finally, sexy times - those guys *sigh*!)
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On the upside, yaaaaaaaaay, Jon and Stephen moving forward with their relationship! Didn't even consider how careful Stephen would have to be, though-this bit made me laugh:
I have never had a hickie hurt this bad before.
And this just made my heart melt:
"My poor Stephen." He whispered.
Stephen sighed. "My always worrisome Jon."
Sigh. Those two, seriously...
I also love the constant battle between Keith and Stephen, though Keith clearly needs to learn to control his temper. Easier said than done, though, sometimes, I'm sure, and given what he's been through (aw :(), anger is to be expected.
Love the mix of emotions you had in here, it was like a roller coaster. Things are starting to heat up, so, yeah, can't wait for the next part :D.
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Alright well-I didn't really mean to have Keith turn out to be so short-tempered but considering the things he's trying to keep a secret from Anderson, well I'm sure anyone would go insane. And Jon and Stephen :) Gosh they are just so cute to write even if it is Stephen's character and he's kind of a jerk. Stephen has to be extra careful not to hurt Jon when doing...things. Lol
Always looking forward to hearing from you!
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Jon and Stephen are always fun to write, no matter what's going on, there's still an adorableness about them that can't be shaken. He and Keith are trying, thankfully Jon and Anderson are patient enough to try and calm them down.
Hope the mental block eases soon!
Angie
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(And YES, finally, sexy times - those guys *sigh*!)
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