I really loved Shou and Saga in this chapter. They were like the little bit of shiny hope you were talking about in a comment a few chapters ago. I was like, "yes! It's all going to be ok! 'cause Shou is trying to be happy again!" Then I got all happy again because Hiroto is safe for now, even if he's mad about it. So Nao's in the hospital, Hiroto and Ash are in a crazy place, the vampires are out to kill everyone and there's only one chapter left... sounds like a good chapter.
Also, yay for side projects and second parts to stories! ^.^
Oh yay! Yes. :D We're glad you saw that--This whole chapter kind of has that hopeful feeling (in the sense that Nao and Hiroto and Ash are going to be okay) and then at the same time....you have to remember that Hiroto has been writing some very, very melancholic things throughout his journal and that certainly takes away from the hope. Its sort of an contradiction, this chapter. :D I love it--I'm in love with it.
I can't wait until Shou smiles again. :D Whenever that is. :D
For now, of course, being the key word. I think, at this point, its very clear that we are NOT very nice to our characters, real or original. :D We shall see. :D
I hope you like this well enough to stick around during part two. :D I have high hopes for it...but my excitement extends to all of it right now. I'm sort of just overjoyed about getting to write it at all, getting to share it, that I just hope people like it. :D Your reviews, thus far, are indication that we're doing something right. :D
Hrm, I don't know what to say... It was a good chapter and you let us into how Hiropon got to where he is at the moment. I don't know what else to say, I just woke up and am still super groggy. Might expand on this later.
P.S. Glad to hear two more part are a-coming! I'll be waiting.
The fact that you read at all is great for us--how much you write doesn't matter. :D Just that you liked it and that you found it worth the time to tell us. :D We're glad you think it was good--we were certainly worried. :D
They are coming indeed. :D Hopefully just as quickly (we say hopefully in case of those crazy-random happenstances that could slow us down. We're pretty stubborn though ^_^) and maybe two more months from now (less than that?) we'll have all three done. :D That would be nice.
Thank you again for sticking around and staying with us--You initially told us, in your first comment on chapter one, that it interested you (and you were expecting Tora/Saga in it ^_^)--we were so glad to hear that then and so glad that you stuck around for every chapter following that. Seriously, we're excited when you comment. :D
Yes, it's...exactly that. Cruel and necessary at the same time. This was a tough chapter for us, to be honest. Because we had a lot to close up and still make sure it all matched from beginning to end. The whole way we laid clues. So it was sort of a tie up chapter and an explanation chapter; we knew it was necessary; just as necessary as it is to protect Hiroto for his big dumb. He made a really big dumb. ^_^ But it was totally fun to watch.
I know Jackie already nabbed your final chapter comment because we said - oh you start at the top and I'll start at the back in the reviews we had to answer so she got there before me - but I just wanted to say thank you for reading this too. I really appreciate it and - well - I sort of owe my love of Alice Nine all to you...and Jackie too, as without me having found them through you she likely wouldn't have either
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Also, yay for side projects and second parts to stories! ^.^
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I can't wait until Shou smiles again. :D Whenever that is. :D
For now, of course, being the key word. I think, at this point, its very clear that we are NOT very nice to our characters, real or original. :D We shall see. :D
I hope you like this well enough to stick around during part two. :D I have high hopes for it...but my excitement extends to all of it right now. I'm sort of just overjoyed about getting to write it at all, getting to share it, that I just hope people like it. :D Your reviews, thus far, are indication that we're doing something right. :D
Thank you! Thank you thank you thank you. :D
-J
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P.S. Glad to hear two more part are a-coming! I'll be waiting.
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They are coming indeed. :D Hopefully just as quickly (we say hopefully in case of those crazy-random happenstances that could slow us down. We're pretty stubborn though ^_^) and maybe two more months from now (less than that?) we'll have all three done. :D That would be nice.
Thank you again for sticking around and staying with us--You initially told us, in your first comment on chapter one, that it interested you (and you were expecting Tora/Saga in it ^_^)--we were so glad to hear that then and so glad that you stuck around for every chapter following that. Seriously, we're excited when you comment. :D
Thank you!
-J&M
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Thanks for reading dude. :D We really appreciate it. And we promise things get happy...eventually. Amid all the sadness, there is always hope. :D
-J&M
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