Shou broke my heart in this one. I was on the verge of crying for almost the whole chapter and then he said he was going to get Aiko and I just lost it. That was the saddest thing I think I've read in a while. Is it weird if I thank you for making me cry? I'll say right now that it's really hard to do so the fact that you managed it makes this story even more full of awesome for me.
Also, I like the last scene taking place on the sidewalk. It seems to me like the perfect place for them to be.
OMG NAO! I just realized he hasn't really been in the last like three chapters for more than a second and no one noticed. I didn't even notice! WTF me!?! Now he's gonna get eaten and no one's going to be there to save him because they're all caught up in Tora's stupid! O.O
Ahh you know Shou broke my heart too. He’s my favorite now. I said that Tora drew me into the Alice Nine world, Shou kept me. Shou and Nao are my boys, I flip flop between them depending on the day or the daydream *^_^*. Jackie, on the other hand, loves Hiroto (though she’ll tell you she loves them all - which is true, we both do, but Hiroto is her favorite). With that said it kills me a little how much we hurt Shou in this chapter. Though we knew it was coming, simply because we knew from the first chapter that Aiko would die
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Poor Shou. As much as I did dislike Aiko, I never wanted him to hurt like that. *Sniffles* I hope Hiropon can give him comfort, but who knows I don't even know what to say about Tora right now; I'm glad Shiki made him face the consequences of his actions, to some extent. *Sigh* And I don't even want to know what happens to Nao (figuratively speaking, of course). Another great chapter.
Aww!! Yes that was a particular moment of enjoyment when we found that as a doodle to and saved it to be used; just like Saga's hand gesture he loves to do on the part about Saga. We're glad you liked that little detail too! ^_^ Thank you for noticing at all in fact.
Ah Shou. *shakes head* Poor Shou indeed. We are mean to him as we are to Hiroto, Tora and Nao. Thus far Saga’s denial has saved him a lot of heartache. ^_^ It’s strange when we start writing because we have to be cautious and careful of who knows what to make sure the story stays accurate
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Must comment here because something interesting happened! Haha.
I read chapter 10 and 11 on Saturday night when I was at the height of my fever. (That's why I could only read until then too, or else I would've marathoned the whole unread chapters. XD) Anyway, those were two very intense chapters. And chapter 11 with Daichi's fierce words gave me a dream that night! I dreamt of Daichi and Shiki as Reita and Aoi actually, only I "knew" they were Daichi and Shiki, not the latter. I can't remember the details of the dream, it was sort of adventure-like, and at some point I met them. They spoke stressful voices like those portrayed in this chapter.
Yep, I just dropped by to say that. :D I'll give a proper review when I catch up with all the unread chapters - which I hope to do with all this sudden free time I've got from staying at home.
Please do stop to comment on that because Jackie and I both sort of freaked out excitedly over it. In fact there is no doubt in my mind that we found that the most amazing thing we’d heard in a long, long while
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HA! Well at least the next chapter wasn't far away. It's better when you don't have to wait for the next chapter. XD
Yes!! We really tried for the curious Tora aspect; it's something about him that we've seen throughout various videos and interviews - but it's not his interest in darker things that made us decide to make him curious about this in particular. I think his personality lends himself to be curious to this particular topic.
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It gets them in to trouble too. :D Jackie is more of a nervous sort--she gets anxious about poking her head into other things and Mandy is the opposite--totally outgoing and she'll poke something to see if its alive. :D
Ahh yeah but he's a cute fathead and really it's not his fault for being curious. He's a curious little tiger. :D The Shou and Hiroto part - yes!! They are...awww, like that. Poor Shou. For my love of him I'm REALLY mean to him in fiction. ^^
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Also, I like the last scene taking place on the sidewalk. It seems to me like the perfect place for them to be.
OMG NAO! I just realized he hasn't really been in the last like three chapters for more than a second and no one noticed. I didn't even notice! WTF me!?! Now he's gonna get eaten and no one's going to be there to save him because they're all caught up in Tora's stupid! O.O
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Another great chapter.
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-J&M
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I read chapter 10 and 11 on Saturday night when I was at the height of my fever. (That's why I could only read until then too, or else I would've marathoned the whole unread chapters. XD) Anyway, those were two very intense chapters. And chapter 11 with Daichi's fierce words gave me a dream that night! I dreamt of Daichi and Shiki as Reita and Aoi actually, only I "knew" they were Daichi and Shiki, not the latter. I can't remember the details of the dream, it was sort of adventure-like, and at some point I met them. They spoke stressful voices like those portrayed in this chapter.
Yep, I just dropped by to say that. :D I'll give a proper review when I catch up with all the unread chapters - which I hope to do with all this sudden free time I've got from staying at home.
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Yes!! We really tried for the curious Tora aspect; it's something about him that we've seen throughout various videos and interviews - but it's not his interest in darker things that made us decide to make him curious about this in particular. I think his personality lends himself to be curious to this particular topic.
No, no!! You never fail at commenting, leaving one at all means loads to the both of us! Thank you reading and reviewing!
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We're totally glad you can relate though. :D!
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