Mercy Me - Chapter Seven | Love Is Not A Victory March

Oct 13, 2009 23:48


(This is a sequel to the story God Bless Catastrophe - we recommend you read that first.)

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luminous_vibe October 14 2009, 04:55:13 UTC
I love love love LOVE the use of the word "intimate" in this chapter. Right before Ashton thought of it as such I was thinking it's going to be such and intimate thing between them and then he thought it and it was perfection in a sentence. This sentence in fact: Ash couldn’t even fathom himself the level of intimacy he was asking for... Now I feel like a dork for going back and finding it ( ... )

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fae_dreamdance October 14 2009, 19:06:52 UTC
Don't feel like a dork. :D Unless we are supposed to feel like dorks for adoring that you went back and looked at all--that it was important enough for you to note. :D Thank you so much for that. :D ( ... )

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fae_dreamdance October 14 2009, 18:24:20 UTC
Twenty-six. :D New record, my friend. Bravo. You should be proud. :D I am ecstatic--over the moon even. :D Yay!! You did a good Pon impression too--I was nostalgic for a moment. ^_^

I am smiling like an idiot and so is Mandy--we're so happy you liked this. We were both worried about it and very very nervous to post it so you've certainly made our day in that retrospect. Go you!!!!

I hope that (o>

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maunetjeret October 14 2009, 16:12:44 UTC
This chapter was amazing. I can't really think of any other way to describe it. I think I love NaoxAsh moments almost as much as ToraxSaga. Great way to wake up!

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fae_dreamdance October 14 2009, 17:30:42 UTC
We are speechless; honestly. We know how deep your love for ToraxSaga is and to think that NaoxAsh are creeping their way up behind that ship is amazing. Certainly not to replace, however. :D They can co-exist in a long list of favorites; we both have a slew of favorite pairings ourselves. :D But ee are grateful for hear that you like that pairing and absolutely over the moon that you like them at all. :D We like them too--but we are biased. :D So that is amazing to us. :D

Its actually a little shocking; so thank you. :D You've rendered both of us speechless and shocked. That is the biggest compliment--thank you. We CANNOT say that enough though we'll try to. :D

-M&J

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vampiremilly October 14 2009, 22:16:27 UTC
oh wow! that was so very touching! i love the way Ashton opened up to Nao. he has so much emotion! this was beautifully written! hehe, so, is there gunna be some Naoxash in the near future, hm? *nudge*nudge* hehe. ^_^ this was a very good chapter, and i'm very excited for the next!

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fae_dreamdance October 16 2009, 03:08:26 UTC
Oh thank you so much!!! We really really appreciate your compliments. :D Yes, yes--more Nao/Ash to come in the future. Nao/Ash and Tora/Saga are the two pairings we intend to explore in this installment of our three part series. :D We like them but its VERY important to us that the readers do too.

So we are ECSTATIC to hear that you want them around. :D

Thank you again--we can't wait to see what you think too!!! Yay!

-M&J

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fae_dreamdance October 17 2009, 01:49:48 UTC
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That is like the easiest way to show you how FUCKING STOKED we are to have you compliment us like that. :D Gosh...!! The concepts in this chapter are very ahh...inclusive of what we usually write. Its a glimpse, if you will, into our usual themes and such and the fact that they are well received makes us happy. So thank you!!!!

Mandy says that your comments made her day less shitty--you seriously are making us blush and bounce with excitement at the same time. We're so grateful for everything you've said--and all in the same chunk of time too! You spoil us--though we aren't complaining. :D

-J&M

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