Candy Shop

[facesandmasks]

Title: Candy Shop
Pairings: Yunjae
Rating: G/PG
Warnings: You might not understand this story. Fluff is towards the end. Inspired by Madonna's "Candy Shop", Christina Aguilera's "Candyman" and Aaron Carter's "I Want Candy".
Genre: Romance, Fluff, (Attempted) Crack
Summary: Who knew that getting Turkish Delights would involve mental torture?

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Comments

Spot!

[facesandmasks]

Spot for ritssu!

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[ritssu]

You're JOKING!!!!!
OMG.... i'm tearing because of laugh!
I choked my self at the end (if i died it is entirely your fault)!!! Gyahahahahaha!!!
The "CUT!"... Kyahahahahaha!!!!!
Turkish? Istanbul? Gyaaaaaaa!!!
You should put crack beside romance and fluff seriously...
Sorry for the lateness, just opened my compy...

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[ritssu]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't STOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!
My mother just asked me why i'm laughing alone...
Then my brother said ,'she fotgot to take her medicine!'
aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhI i can't stop smiling!!!!!
Yunnie and jae kisssing, they owned the earth! the rest of us just rent the earth...

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[facesandmasks]

Ahh. You poor thing. Being made fun of by your brother.

I'm already planning for the smut version of this. Do keep a look out for it =)

[haru_ran]

*bwahahahahahahahahahahahaha*rolling over the floor after she fell out of her chair*
The end! The end! Hilarious!! xDDDDDD

Ooooh~~ I would like to eat a Jae!candy, too. Just like Yunho~ *______________*

I love it~ It's a really nice story, Fir bb. ^______^
Gaaah~ my throat is sore! It hurts to laugh and swallow~ ><"

[facesandmasks]

You're having sore throat? Take lozenges to suck on and drink lots of water. Avoid anything that can worsen your throat and cough.

Or did you have your tonsils removed?

On a separate note, the ending was added as an afterthought since I felt that something different was needed to bring the story to a close. Fluff is so boring.

[haru_ran]

Aw~ thanks, bb, for your concern. >//////<
Am sitting here with chamomile-tea, water and lezonges since I came back from the doctor. Got a sick-note for a week. ><"

Lol! My tonsils had been removed when I was a child. ^^
Don't know, if it were the big and the small ones or just the small ones though. o.o

Then your end was a good afterthought. ^^
eally liked it. Lol! And as for fluff being boring. It sometimes is like that, but next to the fun in your end I could still feel the fluff. xDD
Anyway, I liked the funny end really much, 'cause it was different and gave your story a nice twist. :D

[facesandmasks]

Actually, I don't know if I've got tonsils or not because I don't even have Adam's apple to start with and that I can sound like a girl.

Damn. I miss being addressed as Miss or Madam.

[moonkissedx]

hahahaha, this was quite funny. :'D I lol-ed so hard. xD I didn't expect the ending, so it was quite a surprise. :)

[facesandmasks]

Thank you for the comment! Honestly speaking, I didn't know that the ending I added as an afterthought would leave readers lol-ing.

[yunhobella]

hehehe..this is funny in a way....
yunho can be that scared????
hahaha, i was thinking bout back in childhood there was this story where two siblings end up in a candy house in the middle of forest.....if u got what i mean...
hehehe....

[facesandmasks]

Yunho? Scared? More like Jaejoong being scared.

Yes yes! That story! It's not Jack and the Beanstalk or Rapunzel but what is it? Shit. Can't remember it. Damn.

[yunhobella]

hahaha...forget about it....*_*
i can't remember it either....
but if u do, please, please tell me....
my memory is getting rusty nowadays...huhuhu
I'M GETtING OLD!!! huhuhu...T___T

[haru_ran]

LOL! It's 'Hansel and Gretel', a German fairy tale from Brothers Grimm. ^^

[yunnie_yah]

“I’m not going to let you go just like that. Because you’re far more delicious than the candies I serve here. Hehehehe.”

That got me tickled esp when I imagined Yunho giggling. LOL!

i perfectly understood the whole one shot. i read back up and realized they were in the middle of a acting scene. LOL!

Thanks for writing this! :D

[facesandmasks]

I doubt that Jaejoong's isn't delicious for Yunho to eat eh?

I wanted to write smut for this but when I wrote this, I was in a rush so I decided to tweak the story. The smut version would come later in the week.

Thanks for the comment! =D