Exactly what it says on the tin. How am I doing? Anything about Jeff that irritates you? Doesn't feel right? Suggestions? Any and all crit welcomed.

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Fair warning: My posting tends to be rather slow due to a busy school schedule. I usually can't post much if at all on Tuesdays and Fridays due to a 10 to 14 hour shift on those days.

[Today the serene atmosphere of the Mayfield park has been interrupted by someone's very public emotional breakdown. A middle-aged man slumps bonelessly on a park bench, his head in his hands, his shoulders shaking with wracking sobs. He's been carrying on like this for some time.]

Oh God...oh God...[That's...about the only coherent thing that ( Read more... )

Department of defense code Alpha-seven-five-nine-gamma-two. Priority one. Request immediate connection to Division 6 emergency network. ARGOS biological console reporting in. Catastrophic failure of all network protocols detected. Console has been removed from terminal. Repeat: console has been removed from terminal. Current whereabouts unknown, ( Read more... )

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They found him ( Read more... )