two.

[exxelerate]

two.
two hundred and four words
forlorn

Yoon A brings the spoon to her mouth, closing her eyes to savor the creamy chocolate explosion in her mouth. It's three-something in the morning, and the ice cream helps Yoon A relax; the ice cream helps Yoon A let her character mask down. It's three-something in the morning and Yoon A doesn't have to worry

Comments

[xiao_baka]

Oh, Yoona. This was a beautiful character drabble exploring her, and the last line was especially poignant. ♥

[exxelerate]

I enjoy writing Yoon A very much and I feel like her character doesn't receive enough depth. Tyvm for reading :D ♥

[just_keep_on]

The description of three-something is <3 Also the use of ice cream, which can be a celebratory food or a comfort food was really good too, because even though it can be either - and seemed more like both in this - it can also be extremely bittersweet.

Poor Yoona. I love how you twisted the mood so easily (there is peace and there is no one around her), changing the silence and changing the ice cream from sweet to bitter.

(And LOL, I suddenly remember that Gubne commercial, except this one doesn't end quite as well.)

Wonderful emotion <3

[exxelerate]

I think the lack of detail when referring to the time adds to the sense of Yoon A's loneliness. And hah - I just love ice cream. :D

I love Yoon A, really ~ ♥

(If only Yulsic would only appear to each side of Yoong to cheer her up!)

Tyvm for reading!

[xjannyx]

Un... deep, slight !angst as well.
Though very well written!
I love to read Yoona fics, and drabbles ♥