sixteen.

Jun 16, 2009 19:51

sixteen.
one hundred (exactly, according to msw07) words.
wait for me (until I stay)

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prompt → snsd_fics, jessica, jessica/tiffany, tiffany

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emda July 6 2009, 03:49:20 UTC
my poor Sica *hugs*
short but really great!!!

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just_keep_on July 6 2009, 03:56:28 UTC
1. Why must I always check LJ before I go to sleep? It never amounts to good things.
2. Not that this isn't a good thing, it's just ... FANGIRL MODE ON.
3. YOU BROKE MY HEART WHY DO YOU BREAK MY HEART ;____;
4. SICA WHY MUST YOU BE SO STUBBORN FREAKIN A.
5. I like the concept of Fany being the one to wait for Sica to make up her mind. It seems to fit that Fany would be the patient one, the resilient one.
6. Tiffany's smile is uncertain... the look doesn't suit her very well... Loved that because I can totally picture it and it makes my heart break at what and who caused it and why.
7. AGAIN WHY SICA MUST YOU BE SO STUBBORN DAMMIT THE GIRL LOVES YOU!!
8. Have I mentioned that I love this concept? The ideas of what went on before this scene are swirling in my mind and make me fangirl this scene even more <3 ( ... )

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exxelerate July 6 2009, 06:25:45 UTC
I love how you're able to list 12 things when there aren't even that many lines/sentences in this über short fic LMAO<333: I love your comments, you >:

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pineapple_rabu July 7 2009, 00:48:37 UTC
Part "Awe" and "Dammit, give in, Sica!"

lol

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setupforyou July 8 2009, 04:30:00 UTC
1. You did great with this one. It's short and most definitely sweet. <3
2. Body language is so grrrrreat!
3. I love it whenever Jessica is portrayed as this unattainable person, like the hard-to-get, but when you get her, it's definitely worth it kind of person.
4. I like the subtle comfort that Jessica gives Tiffany, though Tiffany has this uncertain smile on her face.
5. Keep writing - you're AMAZING. The UTTERLY INDESCRIBLE type of amazing. <33333

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