nine.

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nine.
eight hundred and eighty words.
rock me in, let it out

When Tiffany feels the familiar warmth leave her body suddenly in the night, Tiffany knows something is wrong. Her eyes still closed, she listens as the zip of Jessica's jeans fills the room while the older girl dresses. The bedroom door opens, and Tiffany can hear Jessica's soft footsteps

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[just_keep_on]

I feel like I held my breath throughout the whole thing and could only breathe at the last line. Wow...

First off, jeans being zipped up and the thought that implies - heh. Then how Fany can’t sleep without her, which is endearing; her grumpiness and interactions with the oblivious maknae are so cute <3

The picture you paint with Tiffany waiting in the cold for Jessica and when she comes back... That “lame” greeting: I love it so much, those two in that embrace and being quiet and so close in the cold. Gosh, I love it so much~

Fany’s thought process I liked too, and how she can feel Sica against her skin and Sica’s never-ending need for the physical.

And god, how I love this line: It doesn't take a genius to know when Jessica is lying, but it does take a lover to know when Jessica is frustrated to the point where she simply wants to break down and cry. I love the contrast, the intimate knowing, just the pure emotion

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implied thoughts. heh. jeti fans are so pervy >__> & srsly jessica is such a physical girl *-* it brings skinship to a whole 'nother level.

more pervy thoughts, okay >__>! and rofl i love you comments |D idek how to respond. why aren't we best friends yet, by the way? you should add me on aim/msn ;A;

[just_keep_on]

Jessica's love of skinship is part of the reason why I fangirl her so much <33333333

... Why aren't we best friends yet?? O_O

[exxelerate]

gimme yo msn D:

[xiao_baka]

Ditto just_keep_on's comment; while reading it felt like I couldn't breathe. The tension and worry Fany felt was so unnerving, and a;lskdjf;lksj I give up on trying to comment coherently now. o_O

there's just so much implied in thier relationship, and the writing is beautiful for what it doesn't say; such as how intimate they are, tiffany's concern for jessica and just how well they know each other and asl;jdf;lksjd hokay idek anymore. *____*

...I loved this. It was freaking beautiful

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i fail |D

[xiao_baka]

stfu. >: you, YNK, Tsuna, and all your split personalities are my favourite authors so stuff it. >:

[exxelerate]

LOL Ily you're my favorite okay bb ):

[pineapple_rabu]

This is beautiful, like seriously. I was kind of panicking that something might have happened to Jessica, though. D=

And, Seohyun is like a nice touch of cuteness. Likes, if a story ever lacks that, just throw her name in and it's done, haha.

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Hehe I actually began to write this very long ago but I left it incomplete. When I saw it yesterday, I decided to finish it -- I'm glad the change isn't noticable >__<

Seohyun is adorable, kkk <3

[xhappyegg]

hello there!
i fail at commenting, so don't expect much from this.

i really liked this.
but... what happened to jessica?
and tiffany is really sweet, waiting outside in the cold for like, 2 hours.

"No, no -- sorry Serororo, maybe next time."
did you intentionally put Serororo? xD

ahah, words can't even express how much i liked this.

you write really well~ ♥

[just_keep_on]

Btw, I like rereading this when I'm in a saptastic mood, which happens a lot (like tonight) and to be able to reread this and not get tired of it (and still tear up XP) is a testament to how well written it is <333

[exxelerate]

you are such a loser <3
I love you ))): stop making me smile like a fool.