four

[exxelerate]

four.
one hundred and fifty words
don't think, don't speak

"I'll be right back," Jessica says in a whisper and smiles gently as she softly pads away. Tucked under several blankets with a thermometer protruding from her chapped, sickly lips, Yoon A frowns. They are the only ones awake at this time ("Taeyeon," Jessica had insisted, "go to sleep. I'll

Comments

[xiao_baka]

homg this is so sad and sweet. ;A; Love how you tied Krystal to Yoona, similar to the Seohyun/Krystal one-liner but their roles are reversed; Krystal was Yoona's substitute in the other piece, whereas it's the other way round here. Just so... bitter. :/

[exxelerate]

I love Kyrstal. Hah! Her similarity to Yoon A found in Jessica's pre-debut pictures is really stunning and (when thinking back to when Jessica had first debuted and filmed that interview where she had begun to cry and apologize for 'not being a good enough sister' to Krystal [or something along those lines])I feel that Jessica has a strong desire to be close to her sibling but is blocked from doing so somehow. In enters Yoon A.

I love Yoon A too ;o; Sorry, Yoong!

[just_keep_on]

I love how in 150 words, you are able to bring in so many different characters (four!), express such a range of feelings (comfort! fond exasperation! longing! bitter! unrequited angst!) and yet not make it seem heavy at all.

I like this idea of Jessica seeing Yoona as a replacement for Krystal because a) the longing of being with one's sister and b) the longing of being one's lover.

... I don't even know if that made sense. I just loved it, k? <3333

[exxelerate]

Hah - your comments seem to add a whole level of depth to my writing which I did not even think about. Thank you -- I'm flattered. ♥.

[pineapple_rabu]

That's so cute! Sister replacement. <33

[xjannyx]

Feels sad when she's referred as "sister replacement".
Sica chooses Yoona over sleep ♥ It's YoonSicretive love!
Great drabble!