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Fic: Vers: I: Martha

Apr 22, 2009 21:03

Title: Vers
Category: Smallville
Parts: 7
Date of Completion: 3 June 2009
Primary Characters: Lois Lane, Clark Kent, Martha Kent, Lana Lang
Rating: PG-13
Setting: post-season 8
Summary: Clark and Lois, finding their way.
Additional Notes: Nominated under "Best Overall Short", "Best Fic Written in 2009" and "Best Kiss" in the 2009 Smallville Fanfic ( Read more... )

vers, fic: smallville

Comments 21

miss_tress April 23 2009, 02:53:30 UTC

Perfect. Perfect. Perfect.

Beautiful angel_clair April 23 2009, 13:22:32 UTC

It's been a long time since I read any SV and even longer since I read anything PG. This was really beautiful. Congrats.

Re: Beautiful penumbra April 23 2009, 21:41:39 UTC

Thankyou. ♥

leonhart_17 April 24 2009, 01:34:37 UTC

wow...this is beautiful! I always loved their interactions on the show... I can't wait to read more! Really really great job! The writing is gorgeous!

alejandrita439 May 2 2009, 06:58:43 UTC

aaa this story is amazing..
:D
i love this chapter :D

_touched May 7 2009, 19:24:26 UTC

Wow, this is just absolutely grogeous, really. You know, I was just talking with one of my friends the other night and we were talking about the Smallville fandom, the writer's, the fanfic, and the fandom in general...yeah, lots to talk about there. But, anyway, we were talking about how there are so many wonderful Smallville fanfic authors or even fanfic authors in general, that write so much better than the writer's of those novels, shows, movies, etc. And, well, I think that maybe the show would be better off if some of you fanfic author's were writing it.

And, you're one of those author's, and it's so easy to sink into something you write, because it's so beautiful like for example:

He swept into my heart with the autumn wind, eddying the brown-red leaves and breaking the silvery cobwebs of my heart; he was unexpected, bringing with him cool sunlight and then stinging rain, and not seeing anything in himself to love but gently asking it nonetheless - so I love him, for his big rain-filled eyes and kite-flying hands; because he ( ... )

penumbra May 7 2009, 22:41:54 UTC

Thankyou ♥. I don't know that SV would benefit by having me on its staff, though -- I would only write about Clark and Lois!

Oh, and I think the idea of Lois as the daughter that Martha never had, was beautiful too. I love that they can each be to the other, what the one doesn't have.

I actually consider that part of the subtext underpinning the show. It's one of the things I love the most about SV.

_touched May 7 2009, 22:59:08 UTC

You're more than welcome, always happy to point out the obvious. *g* And, ya know, you on the SV staff only writing for Clark and Lois, would be the perfect thing for S9. Maybe, we would get what we need to be more working towards, and less of some of the other stuff. :)

I do, as well, and it's actually nice to see that I'm not alone in that line of thinking, either. It's a good facet to the series and also helps to illustrate, how important Lois really is.