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(DAY 5: #55) STARBURST

Jul 30, 2015 10:13

Title: Starburst
Pairing: Baekhyun/Chanyeol
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3400w
Summary: As soon as he stepped off the train Chanyeol was in love.

( As soon as he stepped off the train Chanyeol was in love. )

round: 1, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

brittlepin July 31 2015, 16:35:35 UTC

awww this was so cute ;;

Such a dreamy and beautiful world, where people with powers can see each other's gifts. Though it sounds a bit lonely too, but I had great visuals of Baekhyun and Chanyeol's unique abilities ;; Also, the scene where they kissed was beautiful ;; Imagining all the lights surrounding them and floating around them, lighting them up ;;

ext_3250610 August 3 2015, 01:55:02 UTC

this was so beautifully written. it caught me from the beginning, with the description of the place in chanyeol's eyes when he was getting out of the train. i like how you kind of have different writing styles, and im guessing this one, which is apparently less frequent in you, must be quite hard to get. or maybe it's natural for you, i dont know, but either way, i think it worked really well this time. im going to be honest with you, i usually dont like fantasy. at least, not in fics. you must be one of the few, no, the only one who has made me like a fic in this genre so far. and this is not something i could have said before this fic. i like that you're working on writing this genre because you seem to genuinely like it, and i think you are able to make it work ( ... )

greeent August 3 2015, 07:37:36 UTC

i have always loved chanbaek superpower!au, be it mama or exodus or any other super power they have. this was beautiful, so so beautiful i dont know why i feel sad hahaha. i think it has something to do with only the both of them that could see and feel it but at the same time its what makes me love this idea this story so so muchhh. ugh i'm bad with words but i hope you get that i really do love this fic ;_;♡

noonaofdarkness August 4 2015, 13:57:21 UTC

This was lovely. I liked how serene everything felt, from the lights to their interactions. it was subtle, but sweet. You managed to paint a very vivid world in so few words, so very well done. In some way, I feel like the story is just beginning. (not requesting a sequel, just saying it ended with hope and anticipation for the characters).

I'm also a sucker for Baekhyun being so direct with Chanyeol. and their powers bringing them together in some special understanding of one another. d;aww.

great job!