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[FIC] RPF: every breath you take [2/3]

Jan 12, 2013 14:35

I'm only a couple of hours late, oops. But here is part 2 for you guys! 8D

Still beta'd by halfthewords and inspired by helena_s_renn.

every breath you take [2/3]

Characters/Pairing: Sean Bean/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~6120 for this part
Disclaimer: Didn’t happen, a product of imagination.
Summary: Someone is watching Sean, and it’s not Viggo. Part II: Viggo ( Read more... )

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Comments 23

helena_s_renn January 12 2013, 07:15:36 UTC

uh-oh. that bastard's going to be in the house, isn't he? cliffhanger!

subtitle for this should be sex and paranoia. damn, the combination of the two is both erotic and lethal. really amps it up. gasping for breath over here, i shit you not. man, in the sack they really behave like you'd expect men in their twenties be. and that's fucking hot.

a better performance for boromir? the hell you say, sean! puh-leeze.

some idea viggo had (glad he did, lol) - smells like desperation to me. as long as the whack-job is only into cameras and not sniper rifles, then i guess they'll be relatively fine. for now.

evocates January 17 2013, 10:24:46 UTC

CLIFFHANGER, yes. :3

You know, that is one apt subtitle. 8D And ehehehehe, about them behaving like they're twenties, I handwave this 1) this is fiction, and 2) they're pretty desperate so it's realistic. All those things like adrenaline can do oand all that. 8D

Sniper rifles, eh? 8D Now that's an idea.

Thank you for the comment, lovely! I'm still rolling around being pleased that you like it.

wildshadowstar January 12 2013, 07:17:40 UTC

You had to end on such a cliffhanger. Now I can't wait to hear how this continues.

evocates January 17 2013, 10:25:33 UTC

Only two more days, if it helps! 8D

mooms January 12 2013, 09:30:26 UTC

Noo! Like Viggo I am hiding under the covers! This is very hot and again, very scary. I just know that the stalker is going to be in the house and curse you again for another evil cliffie!

evocates January 17 2013, 10:26:20 UTC

Well, no one knows if the stalker is actually in the house, right? Ehehehe. I find the mental image of you hiding under the covers to be adorable. Thank you for commenting, lovely, and I'm really happy you enjoy it. 8D!

bluegerl January 12 2013, 10:17:59 UTC

Oh - just - incoherence - babbling mind. Squees all over, gone wibbly and am madly in love with two glorious men. Again!

Oh, I know the stalker is going to be in the house, and please can I have the first kick with my metal-toed boots? But I also want all his photos that he's taken!

A long time resident of Belsize Park too. In the film world, or close to it! hmmmm.

What colour are Sean's curtains? You seem to know 'them' so well, so inside their minds you are... hell. dammit. I was going to write. now I can't. I LOVE YOU Evo.

evocates January 17 2013, 10:28:10 UTC

please can I have the first kick with my metal-toed boots? But I also want all his photos that he's taken!

HAHHAAHHAHAA. I love this contradictory response. 8D And the stalker in the film world, huh? Maybe. Just... maybe. :3

What colour are Sean's curtains?

I don't know, actually! I'm making it all up as I go, so what the hell. I'm guessing dark green. Completely arbitrary.

Thank you for commenting, Blue! ♥

alex_quine January 12 2013, 11:37:26 UTC

A real ramping-up of the tension and the sensuality - great fun and I'll be waiting for the next part eagerly.
thanks for sharing.

evocates January 17 2013, 10:28:48 UTC

Two more days until the next part! (Because I am really slow with commenting.) Thank you for commenting, Alex. I'm just happy to hear you enjoy it. 8D