[FIC] RPF: every breath you take [2/3]

[evocates]

I'm only a couple of hours late, oops. But here is part 2 for you guys! 8D

Still beta'd by halfthewords and inspired by helena_s_renn.

every breath you take [2/3]

Characters/Pairing: Sean Bean/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~6120 for this part
Disclaimer: Didn’t happen, a product of imagination.
Summary: Someone is watching Sean, and it’s not Viggo. Part II: Viggo

Comments

[peersrogue]

Thank you lj for immediately losing my post.

Let's try again.

Breathless - deep gulp of air what an incredible sex scene. Taken a while to catch my breath! Fascinating paragraph about the false Polaroid pic. I have a feeling there are clues hidden throughout parts 1 & !!. I have my own idea who is responsible for this. Can't wait to be proved right or wrong!!!

Masterpiece of suspense and wow really fantastic sex.

[evocates]

/punches LJ for you.

Hints throughout part 1, huh? Maybe. 8D You should tell me who you think is responsible in two days when I put the next part up! It'll be fascinating to hear.

Thank you for commenting, lovely! ♥

[rubyelf]

You had better not keep us waiting too long for the next part of this...

A brilliant clue with Viggo as the photographer of course recognizing the fake Polaroid...

And the increased creepiness as it all gets closer and closer to home, and as they realize HOW LONG this has been happening...

And the sex is hot enough to cause one's brain to melt into a puddle of goo.

[evocates]

Well, it's only two more days, right? That's not too long? 8D

Yesss, I'm happy to hear that you notice the increasing creepiness. Is it crawling on your skin yet? (I might be getting too much glee from this.) Thank you so much for commenting, Ruby! ♥

[evocates]

I like how real and "simple" this feels, like an every day scene, like something showing how much they know and respect each other. And this inmidst all this mindfuckery, I love it.

I'm just cackling because this is exactly what I wanted and I'm not very sure if I hit the mark because I wrote most of it unconsciously, so I am so pleased that you said that. 8D Two more days until I post part 3! Would you have the time to read then, lovely? :3

[noalinnea]

Noooooo! He will be there, won't he? After that performance in the bedroom? He must be crazy with longing for Sean after a year

[evocates]

I kind of hope that the cliffhanger is not a cliffhanger but that Sean is just getting a snack and comes back to bed and then we get to see them stagger under the growing pressure- a couple of days where nothing happens, then strange phone calls at odd hours and both of them unraveling slowly but steadily

Now that's an interesting idea. /chinhands. 8D And that's all I'm saying about that. I like being mysterious. It keeps the suspense going. /giggles.

despite all his attempts at defying the stalker there is nothing he can do, basically he can just stand there and watch Sean being threatened and taken from him and being inside his head we get a very creepy picture of how this must feel.Yes, exactly. The whole thing is in Viggo's POV as I try to capture exactly that kind of sensation, and it pleases me immensely that it does ring true. Viggo's essentially helpless, both he and Sean are, because man, the both of them are under a mercy of a man that they don't even know. How do you even start dealing with that, really

[noalinnea]

Haha, about the snack thing... I suspect I might be the only person who wants to see more of the tense, nerve-wrecking horrible stuff (basically I am going: Please, please, please, make them suffer more, more horrible details, more frayed nerves, more panic... as I said: Ignore me).

I think there is no sane way of dealing with this and Viggo's need to touch Sean and claim him is something I can relate too (though I guess I'd be clinging, not trying to screw them through the mattress ;) (and something completely different: please read the Stieg Larsson trilogy because I want to be able to talk to you about it! Screw the plot, but there is a very similar kind of intensity there, when one of the main characters gets threatened and I really liked how that situation was described...)

And, yes, I like it! A lot!

[rifleman_s]

"I wanted to categorise every smile you have, every one you would give me."

Seems someone else does too . . .

[evocates]

Oh yes. Definitely. And that might just be the least of it. Ehe.

Thank you!