I'm only a couple of hours late, oops. But here is part 2 for you guys! 8D
Still beta'd by
halfthewords and inspired by
helena_s_renn.
every breath you take [2/3]
Characters/Pairing: Sean Bean/Viggo Mortensen
Rating: NC-17
Words: ~6120 for this part
Disclaimer: Didn’t happen, a product of imagination.
Summary: Someone is watching Sean, and it’s not Viggo. Part II: Viggo
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Breathless - deep gulp of air what an incredible sex scene. Taken a while to catch my breath! Fascinating paragraph about the false Polaroid pic. I have a feeling there are clues hidden throughout parts 1 & !!. I have my own idea who is responsible for this. Can't wait to be proved right or wrong!!!
Masterpiece of suspense and wow really fantastic sex.
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Hints throughout part 1, huh? Maybe. 8D You should tell me who you think is responsible in two days when I put the next part up! It'll be fascinating to hear.
Thank you for commenting, lovely! ♥
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A brilliant clue with Viggo as the photographer of course recognizing the fake Polaroid...
And the increased creepiness as it all gets closer and closer to home, and as they realize HOW LONG this has been happening...
And the sex is hot enough to cause one's brain to melt into a puddle of goo.
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Yesss, I'm happy to hear that you notice the increasing creepiness. Is it crawling on your skin yet? (I might be getting too much glee from this.) Thank you so much for commenting, Ruby! ♥
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I'm just cackling because this is exactly what I wanted and I'm not very sure if I hit the mark because I wrote most of it unconsciously, so I am so pleased that you said that. 8D Two more days until I post part 3! Would you have the time to read then, lovely? :3
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Now that's an interesting idea. /chinhands. 8D And that's all I'm saying about that. I like being mysterious. It keeps the suspense going. /giggles.
despite all his attempts at defying the stalker there is nothing he can do, basically he can just stand there and watch Sean being threatened and taken from him and being inside his head we get a very creepy picture of how this must feel.Yes, exactly. The whole thing is in Viggo's POV as I try to capture exactly that kind of sensation, and it pleases me immensely that it does ring true. Viggo's essentially helpless, both he and Sean are, because man, the both of them are under a mercy of a man that they don't even know. How do you even start dealing with that, really ( ... )
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I think there is no sane way of dealing with this and Viggo's need to touch Sean and claim him is something I can relate too (though I guess I'd be clinging, not trying to screw them through the mattress ;) (and something completely different: please read the Stieg Larsson trilogy because I want to be able to talk to you about it! Screw the plot, but there is a very similar kind of intensity there, when one of the main characters gets threatened and I really liked how that situation was described...)
And, yes, I like it! A lot!
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Seems someone else does too . . .
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Thank you!
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