FIC: Before I Sleep, part 2 (Veronica, Logan, Keith, Lucas(OMC)) PG13 (this part) 2/3

[evie_oh]

Title: Before I Sleep, part 2
Author: evie_0
Pairing/Characters: Veronica, Logan, Keith, Lucas(OMC)
Word Count: 3,926
Rating: NC-17
Summary: This is a kind of AU of my story Living Without HerFuture fic: in this version of events, Veronica tells her dad and Wallace that she has cancer a lot earlier, and they manage convince her to tell Logan about

Comments

[spikeshunny]

I feel like i want to hug you and smack you at the same time...but obviously with lots of love.

Makes my heart jump and then crack at the last line.... we know what happens but Logan & Veronica they deserve to be together it's just not fair!

[evie_oh]

Its funny, when I read your comment I got this really bizarre image of you smacking me in the head with a baseball bat with love written on it... yeah... my mind is a scary place...

Yeah, that last line was a little evil wasn't it? I'm sorry about all the angst... what can I say? I guess I like being a little evil sometimes :P

[flinkkamingo3]

This fic just might kill me.

Don't get me wrong, it's fantastic, but it's just so freaknig sad. Oh, and I think it's cool you're going an "AU" version of your fic. More people should do that.

[evie_oh]

I'm glad you approve of my weird own-fic-AU thing, I was a bit worried that it would just seem... I don't know, self-indulgent or something. But I had to write this, I needed to give these characters another chance (plus, Wallace and Veronica's conversation from the first chapter got into my head and wouldn't leave me alone.)

I'm glad you're enjoying it too, inspite of the evil angstiness :)

[earth2mars]

Love where this section ended. Man, how could someone NOT want to continue reading after that ending?! I'm so glad you didn't hold back on this idea of going AU on your own fic. :)

[evie_oh]

Yes, well I have you to thank for giving me the idea for that cliffhanger don't I? Thank you, again, for your feedback and help with this fic *huggles*

[earth2mars]

Anytime, sweetie, anytime.

[motylik]

I loved the first version of this story a lot, but I think I love this even more. I can't wait to see Logan's reaction to that news, he really has to be overhelmed with so many live-changing news. I love how you depict Lucas. And that you try to show V as a multi-layerd personality and don't just pass blame on her for keeping Logan's kid away from him. It really shows trought how hard that decision was for her, and judging by how great Lucas turned out, I'm not sure if it was a wrong one. But poor Logan never meeting his son until now. *sighs* This story is killing me. I hate it when V suffers and when she suffers and dies it's even worse. You nearly killed me with her panic-attac. *sighs again*
I hope you'll update soon! Can't wait to read more.

[evie_oh]

I actually think I like this version more too. There are some things I miss about the first story that I couldn't find a way to include in this one without just repeating myself (like the flashbacks and stuff) but overall, in a weird way, this story feels a little more hopeful to me

[motylik]

Yes the flashbacks rocked in the last one, I loved the one where Lukas was remembering lying under the stars with V. *sighs* And this one is more hopeful, I think because Logan has a chance to say goodbye. He didn't get that last time.

I think writing one character first and then the other is a really great way to go. This way you really had their POVs down. Maybe RT should try that. *lol*

He's amazing. Really I'd want my son to be like that. I love how much he adorse Veronica. It's just really nice.

The panic attack worked. I didn't find it jarring for a reading POV like it didn't throw me out of the story if that's what you're asking.
Yay that the final chapter should be up soon!

[evie_oh]

I think that flashback with Lucas and V under the stars was actually my favorite part of the first fic, so I'm glad you like it too :)

And I'm happy to hear that the hopefulness I was aiming for worked at least a little, I was getting worried cause everyone just kept on commenting on the extreme angstiness of this story...

Thank you for all of your wonderful assurances! :D

[wildly_wrathful]

Oh, this was just so fantastic! And how you ended it! GUH! Poor Logan! Poor Veronica! Poor Lucas! Just wanna give them all hugs.

Can't wait until the third part. In fact, I'm dying to see what happens next.

[evie_oh]

crap. I think I've just found the downside to posting multi-chapter fics. Now everyone has expectations for the last chapter and I'm having to force myself not to go back and rewrite the damn thing...

I'm so happy you're liking the story so far though, and that I've managed to keep everyone pretty sympathetic. Thanks heaps for commenting :)