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danceswithgary August 22 2011, 18:10:51 UTC
Poor John, all he wanted to do was show Teyla and Ronon the sights. Great combo of roadtrip and whump! :-D

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coolbreeze1 August 22 2011, 18:22:17 UTC
Excellent!! This was exactly what I was wanting! I love the moment when Ronon comes into Teyla's cubicle and she just kind of breaks down. I can imagine how nerve-wracking that would be, to be tired and hurting in an alien hospital and suddenly see a familiar face. The seriousness of John's injuries felt real and intense after the car accident they were in. This story really worked well from Ronon and Teyla's point of view. And yay!! Carson!! I love Carson! Loved the Star Trek jokes at the end too. Thank you!! This was wonderful! :D

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kriadydragon August 22 2011, 20:28:46 UTC
Wonderful! Very intense and heart warming. I loved everyone gathered around John's bed, and McKay being all sneaky with his mad computer skills so knowing when his team was in trouble. Well done:D

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elaiel August 22 2011, 22:44:25 UTC
Lovely!

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dernhelm62 August 23 2011, 00:55:47 UTC
Wonderful story. Great Shep whump with all around teaminess. Just what the doctor ordered. Thanks for this, please, please keep them coming!

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lar_laughs August 23 2011, 04:50:54 UTC
Perfect ending! Snow and sun all in one story! The tension when John was getting fixed up was great and, once again, loved the team aspect. H/C just the way I like it!

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