Excellent!! This was exactly what I was wanting! I love the moment when Ronon comes into Teyla's cubicle and she just kind of breaks down. I can imagine how nerve-wracking that would be, to be tired and hurting in an alien hospital and suddenly see a familiar face. The seriousness of John's injuries felt real and intense after the car accident they were in. This story really worked well from Ronon and Teyla's point of view. And yay!! Carson!! I love Carson! Loved the Star Trek jokes at the end too. Thank you!! This was wonderful! :D
Wonderful! Very intense and heart warming. I loved everyone gathered around John's bed, and McKay being all sneaky with his mad computer skills so knowing when his team was in trouble. Well done:D
Perfect ending! Snow and sun all in one story! The tension when John was getting fixed up was great and, once again, loved the team aspect. H/C just the way I like it!
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